Reviews for First I Giveth

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Screaming Dean 2008-07-06 ch 20,	abuseI'm happy to see you're doing so well. I hope you'll keep writing this.
Sdarian 2008-07-03 ch 20,	abuseI'm kind of upset on how much worse Ranma did then cannon. Sure, things have changed and all, but Ukyo was never much of a hard hitter... Oh well.
lain-wired 2008-06-27 ch 20,	abuseWow... where do I begin? I guess the best way for me to put this is that Ranma 1/2 got me in to fanfiction. Everyday I would check to see if any of the stories I liked had been updated. Sadly, it seemed like less and less people were writing and those who were had horrible grammar, stagnant plot lines, and usually fizzled out in 5 chapters or so. So, I stopped checking the Ranma section... I apologize to YOU for that. This story is wonderfully written and it seems you have a clear plot in mind. The thing I enjoyed most it doesn't jump around to the parts the author want's to write. I've seen it countless times where a certain arc or character was barely mentioned because the writer wanted to skip ahead to their favorite part. Your story moves smoothly, not dragging or jumping, and your writing is nice and descriptive. Oh yeah, not having to read a story that looks like it was composed in a chat room is a huge bonus too! All in all, I LIKE IT! Congrats, you are going on my author alert list. I'll be looking forward to your upcoming chapters.
DarkStrider 2008-06-26 ch 20,	abuseZOMG! :O Awesome :D kowtows Nice to see Ragin!Ranma :D Not enough people do it :D
Kitsune6 2008-06-18 ch 20,	abuseI love this story. Even if it's taking forever to get to the real RN fluff. Damn, you're making me hate Akane even more than I used to. More RN! Keep up the great work. =)
Innortal 2008-06-17 ch 20,	abuseExcellent work as always, well done.
Dumbledork 2008-06-15 ch 20,	abuseGreat fight.
Wonderbee31 2008-06-15 ch 20,	abuseWow, an impressive view of the U/R fight there, and with all that, it does bug me at times when someone is on me about something, and I have no idea as to what it is they are peeved about, and expect me to be able to know, so I get what it was that Ranma was irritated, of course he'll be moreso when Genma tells him about the engagement.
griffenvamp 2008-04-19 ch 19, anon.	abuseUPDATE PLEASE
MoonShine22 2008-03-24 ch 6,	abuseAwesomeness finish finish!
Kitsune6 2008-03-23 ch 19,	abuseI like this story, but damn is it dark. I wish there was more RN fluff. Keep up the good work. =0
Asgeras 2008-03-19 ch 19,	abuseMan, but you must hate Akane. :P I don't care for her too much myself, although my viewpoint isn't quite THAT low. Honestly, I prefer to have Ranma matched with a character from a different series, because all of the girls in Ranma have more than their fair share of faults, but if I had to go with one it would be Ukyo. Canon Ukyo is slightly conniving, but not bitterly so like Shampoo and not quite as violent as, say, Akane. This, apparently, isn't canon, what with the muscle relaxant and all. However, Ukyo had very similar feelings in canon all-the-same, so I still hope for a turnaround so she can at least be his friend. Oh, and I'm definitely looking forward to seeing your version of Akane get what's coming to her. Thanks for the update and I look forward to the next. ^^
NC2001 2008-03-16 ch 19,	abuseWhoo hoo! A new chapter! Please update soon! I really enjoy this series.
Dumbledork 2008-03-13 ch 19,	abuseExcellent new chapter.
hellhound-d.o.w. 2008-03-12 ch 19,	abuseExcellent. A well planned out and flowing story. I like how you incorporated each character from the manga so far while still keeping your own plot. Can't wait for the next chapter.

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