i realy like the stroy your doing but don't you think it's time to rape it up?

Great story, now I hope you can find motivation and update!
Ganbare yo!

"atop a concrete poll" - atop a cement vote? A concrete compilation of question answers? Try POLE.

"giving that stupid girl what fore " FOR

"help reign in her focus." REIN

Still a good story.
Mike

"...waited with baited breath as the arrow..."

Very interesting. Perhaps there were worms on their breath? This is a common error. Usually the correct form is "bated breath". Bated is seldom in used in any other context - it means the same as 'holding one's breath". It comes from the same root as "abated"...

"...bounced of her outstretched hands..." OFF

"...stood next to Ranma right." Ranma's

Fun story,
Mike

Very nice. I like the depth you have added to some of the key players. keep writing!

great story have read it before but don't know if i reviewed then so i leave one now, had to read the story from the beggining to remeber the whole story, anyway i hope for the next chapter to come as soon as possible, see ya then:)

I'm happy to see you're doing so well. I hope you'll keep writing this.

I'm kind of upset on how much worse Ranma did then cannon. Sure, things have changed and all, but Ukyo was never much of a hard hitter... Oh well.

Wow... where do I begin?

I guess the best way for me to put this is that Ranma 1/2 got me in to fanfiction. Everyday I would check to see if any of the stories I liked had been updated. Sadly, it seemed like less and less people were writing and those who were had horrible grammar, stagnant plot lines, and usually fizzled out in 5 chapters or so.

So, I stopped checking the Ranma section...
I apologize to YOU for that. This story is wonderfully written and it seems you have a clear plot in mind. The thing I enjoyed most it doesn't jump around to the parts the author want's to write. I've seen it countless times where a certain arc or character was barely mentioned because the writer wanted to skip ahead to their favorite part. Your story moves smoothly, not dragging or jumping, and your writing is nice and descriptive.

Oh yeah, not having to read a story that looks like it was composed in a chat room is a huge bonus too!

All in all, I LIKE IT! Congrats, you are going on my author alert list. I'll be looking forward to your upcoming chapters.

ZOMG! :O

Awesome :D *kowtows* Nice to see Ragin!Ranma :D Not enough people do it :D

I love this story. Even if it's taking forever to get to the real RN fluff. Damn, you're making me hate Akane even more than I used to.

More RN! Keep up the great work. =)

Excellent work as always, well done.

Great fight.

Wow, an impressive view of the U/R fight there, and with all that, it does bug me at times when someone is on me about something, and I have no idea as to what it is they are peeved about, and expect me to be able to know, so I get what it was that Ranma was irritated, of course he'll be moreso when Genma tells him about the engagement.

UPDATE PLEASE