ok this story is bloody wicked! original and interesting. love how your writing this. please update soon!

I want MORE! This story is AMAZING!

Wow! This is a fantastic story! Amusing but even romantic! I hope you'll update soon!

*much laughter* amazing story i needed a laugh! keep wirting!! or else *glares*

Hey, great story!! I don´t usually review because I don´t speak english very well, but I read something about "paso doble" I´m spanish so if you still want to know it means "doble step" it´s a very popular type of dance around here. Well take care and keep writing stories!!

Just out of curiousity? Did you drop a lot of really bad acid before writing this? My brain hurts from simply trying to decipher the rather glaring grammatical errors.

hmm, very very interesting chapter. so, Smith has found another way into Trinitys brain, and Ferocious has just been proven to be as dumb as Cypher was, and we all know he skipped english classes (or grammar classes, im english, as you can tell). double negitive- dont, nothing.
i especially love that last little bit, very funny. usually i like my characters to be as character-like as pssible, but your case is different. i dont mind how OOC they might be, i live the way you write them, and so dont think of stopping, its your story, you can write it how you like.
keep on writing soon, you really have me hooked again, and i need to know what will happen to Niobe and Trinity...
(sorry, my computer logged me out without me telling it to, and i cant log in now.)

Tehehehehe, Good chapter!
WOO! A cypher person! Nasty Nasty!
Update soon!
Naz x

I am getting extremely tired of the same stuff the same OOC and stuff that would never happen
No doubt its really cute but its also very boring Im drifting into a dream just by thinking about it *yawn* Alright who knows why i actually read it. Next time try to make it in character and about ure name use Treaten My Dreams (which was summited by someone other then me) that one has my vote

I cant decide if i like it or not.. I think its too OOC for me... Like Neo and Trin Dirty dancing? Are you kidding? Well it is in humour but still... But overall it was very good... Better then what i could come up with

K it's very good, very fluffy. Im glad u put this down for humour/romance cuz stuff like that would never happen like that on the neb.

In my Head

In My Head. Its a similar title to this one scripty thing (real crap) whihc I wrote called In My World!

Do the in my head one

*sob* why aren't you updating?