 cyiusblack 2009-10-20 . chapter 2cute sad good story |
 yue no rei 2009-08-15 . chapter 2Hahaha wow such a story condensed into two chapters! Fun reading though. :) |
 thrnbrooke 2009-04-09 . chapter 2Beautiful reread! |
 Deeply-Insane 2008-06-27 . chapter 2Holy Crap! You are awesome and your story was amazing! Thanks so much for writing it and actually finishing it (which is quite a feat considering its length) Your line..."the ultimate way of controlling someone may be through pain, but, in order to have a true consort, you needed to be able to balance it out with pleasure. So that, eventually, your chosen one came to crave the combination only you can provide. And that, was the work of a true artist." is excpecially written well and your use of characters and their own societies is fantastic. I've never been able to get through a story as complicated as yours and still want to read more. Thanks again!
~Tashi~ |
 Lilyyyy 2008-06-19 . chapter 2This was really cute, and nice.
It was better than most Veela!Harry stories, I really liked it. |
 hizeme-neko 2008-06-18 . chapter 2god story!
it took me forever to read
i mean
FOREVER!
lol
but yea took to long for harry and draco to hook up but i loved the circle of light and stuff that was really good and the otehr society the one ron ws in
really cool and relly well thoughht out
i loved all the pairings too
it was great
i really like ginny and riddle never thought of that pairing before but i liek it
gosh really good story i would love some sneak peaks into each of the relationships
and some lemons would be loverly lol
but hats up to u
GREAT story!
loved it! |
 byarenfan 2008-05-24 . chapter 2I love this!! It's really nice!! I think it can be an entirely new story from the books by JKR. Everything's changed! |
 Immortal Sailor Cosmos 2008-05-14 . chapter 2So is Drake a Cotsade member person then? Interesting story, its quite interesting, but I should request that you stick with the prelient ON CHAPTER AT A TIME idea. it took me forever to come back to where I'd left of.
~Immortal Sailor Cosmos |
 ella17 2008-02-08 . chapter 2 so I enjoyed your story a lot, but you might want to re-post it one chapter at a time, so that it doesn't feel so long. |
 ShesTalkingtoTheCar 2007-12-19 . chapter 2great story. tell me if there is a sequel or not. |
 ellie 2007-09-30 . chapter 2 rubbish |
 shazia Born confused 2007-06-02 . chapter 2heyya.
this is a great fic. (Altho i have to say that i do find it really difficult imagining a harry with silky, curly hair)
it's really original. i haven't (atleast not yet) read another fic like this.
and i like the ending
- altho the bit abt being reincarnated again and again for draco was kinda strange - who is incharge of the Circle whilst draco's still in a young form - by which i mean in the body of a toddler...
or is there none...? oh well...
and i completely loved all of ur secret societieties and clubs
and i liked ur bit abt tom/ginny - i hate vevil ginny stories, but it worked really well in urs...
tc
:) |
 hentai18ancilla 2007-05-31 . chapter 2GREAT! And Harry sounds sweet... |
 6tigercubs 2007-04-29 . chapter 2ya very bad/chessy ending...but very good story/... |
 Wolf-in-Sheep-Clothing 2007-04-06 . chapter 1luv it! |