keep going

this is good, but a little confusing. I would really like you to continue...it seems you haven't updated it in a while. Oh, and I read that there would also be a Gan Ning/Lu Xun pairing, which makes me very very happy. I'm a sucker for that pair ^_^ Well, I'll be awiting for your next update, and I truly hope this is not a discontinued fic. ^_^

Yay! Finally i'm back! Wow! It's a really cool start, I like! Uh isn't pretty and beautiful the same thing? ^__^

this story makes a lot of sence. Poor Wei Yan
Well this looks like yet another good story by you*worships author*

SMEG-OUT! That's freakin' cool! totally confusing, and cookies!
heh heh... fairy boy. makes me wanna write one like that. good job,but I really wanna have a clue as to what in the world they're talking about.

Hey, good start, I like it so far. So Wei Yan's not dead? That's good, he shouldn't die, (Although...I don't think that YOU of all people would kill him...)
Wei Yan should've just flicked Zhang He into the wall when he had the chance, it would've been funny to see Zhang flying across the room from a flick, he he.
So...Wei Yan can heal himself, and Zhang He is a fairy? Strange...Lu Xun should be able to create fire, that would be perfect for him.
I like the fact that Xun's in this, but I wanna say right now please don't pair him up with a guy, that's just wrong. If Xun's gonna be with anyone, it should be Da (Lu Xun and Da Qiao, WOOT!) I take it that Wei Yan is gonna be with Yue Ying, right? Good pairing, not one you see very often...I think it will work.
Anyhoo, I think I've rambled enough, in short, it was very good, please update soon.
Lu Xun 88

(screams with joy) You made Zhang He a fairy! You made Zhang He a fairy! Have you been reading my mind, Nat? I like this. Can relate to Wei Yan a bit with the whole... you know... knife to skin thing (blushes). but that was a long time ago and I'm just LOVING this story. Nicely written too. Bravo (applauds)

Uh...Ok... X_x

Wei... Yan?
*pokes him* Erm... you didn't just... kill him, did you? *tears up* YAN-YAN (not the old guy).
This one is shaping out good, despite how short it is... and of course. my favorite scenario: Wei Yan the Protagonist and Zhuge Liang the antagonist... you know how to please me well...
*sends cookies your way*
There BEST be more... I need my Wei Yan... well, OUR Wei Yan...

I noticed that all of your fanfics contain Weiyan and Zhuge Liang. Very Shu. :)