 inarae 2004-11-02 . chapter 1 Aw...pain in the heart-strings! That was impossibly cute and realistic. Very in character. Thanks for the good read! |
 Alian lost. 2004-06-11 . chapter 1...interesting! |
 Aloe 2004-03-20 . chapter 1 Poor Kaiba. Sigh. |
 Selena Style 2004-03-19 . chapter 1Oh burn by Seto. That was short, yet thought out. Yami's lines of "To live" just hit dead on his heroic nature. |
 kimi no vanilla 2003-12-01 . chapter 1I like this very much, especially the little hint into Yami's thoughts in the last few lines, but I'm puzzled why you call it a drabblefic... those are supposed to be exactly 100 words. |
 Misura 2003-12-01 . chapter 1*sighs* Kaiba can be so .. *Kaiba*! He simply doesn't understand people like Yugi, ridiculing them for what is, in fact, their great strength.
A touching vignette, describing both their characters and the differences between them very well and realistic. Loved the ending line too, though it'd be nice if Yugi's dream about Kaiba wasn't *that* far out of reach. |
 Starlit Hope 2003-11-30 . chapter 1That was cool... |
 Shandrial 2003-11-29 . chapter 1Nice ending! Great one liner. The rest of it was short and to the point, and well done also. |
 Animom 2003-11-29 . chapter 1Well-done: tight, clean, evocative prose. Good "zinger" at the end, set up well.
(I thought drabble was a ficlet of exactly 100 words?) |