you teased us -crys-

great :D

Aaw! That was so sweet! I love how in the end he respected her so much that he stopped. Very well written. I loved it!

I can't believe you wrote this, I swear it has to be -by far- the greatest thing I've read in Lord knows how long. You did an excellent job, and your choice of words is simply amazing because it was extremely humorous and I really felt like I was there! I should pay you to shape up my story (not a fanfic, a real story 100 pages so far), heh heh. Anyways, keep up the awesome work, latz!

I thought it was great. I haven't read the manga but I'm halfway through the anime and know what goes on in the end (yes, i always spoil the ending for myself :p). But anyways, just want to say awesome job. It's pretty much what I've always thought would happen, with Hideki being such a nice person and all. So yes, keep up the good work. :)

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Just...wow...it made me cry...It's so sweet this fic...the best i've read ...congratulations

Very touching story, one of the best of the chobits romance genre I've seen!

SO SWEET!

how lovely. so cute. nice

what a wonderful story you fully caught all the aspects of Chobits in that nice little one-shot! You captured the true feelings of both Chii and HIdeki and added some suprises as well, I loved it! Sequel? Maybe? Please?

That was the best story i've ever read...

omg, pure genius! No one could have writen a better story than that. Wow...! It's perfect. Congradulations... sigh So sweet, i can't describe it! oh...wow you're really good!write another story like that.

Thank you so much!

Hannah

Excellent fic, _ Very well-written and realistic, :)

aw.. that's so cute!
and i so tottaly agree that sex shouldn't be the basis of a relationship.
You go girl!
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touching..yes. I agree completely with your last lines about sex not being the base of a relationship, however, I love sex, and I love the fics that come up with other ways around their situation...aka...anal? anyways...great job

write more!