Please write a story from the chipmunks i promise to review it if you do!

Born to burn and blaze and die-

Like my father, after all.

oh, ow. That line just kills me. One of the most heartbreaking things I've ever read. excellent poem, angsty without getting melodramatic.

Great poem.

Set this to music, it'd make a great song.

amasing.

*slaps this into her diary*

I couldn't have said it better myself.

Wow. All I can say is 'WOW' that was a fantastic, deep poem. Your quite a poet.

Great job, that really does fit him. "Dancing on the razor's edge, won't matter if I fall..." that's just so him. The dare devil, never worries about falling, cause he always gets back up. I'll say it again, great job!

-Maxy Steel

Ellen, you KNOW I love it. I have two fan fic authors that I am SO privileged to get to read their stuff before it even hits this place. I was just bowled over by this...so powerful. :) Keep up the good work!