OMG ROFL. It goes so well! It makes a hell of a lot of sense for him to think all of that. "And yet I love you all the same, because you bring me food" "Don't hate me cuz I'm beautiful, I'm ugly next to you" "Alas: I cannot doff my pants, 'cause then you'd see my tail" HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA Great job.

hehe. thats vey cute... does inuyasha really have a tail?

Very cute!

LMAO! I think that last line caught me my surprise even more than the last one! Very amusing!

i like very muchly so!

So cute... and very IC! The best humour poems I've read.

Never thought about it, but Inuyasha probably does have a tail, lol. Rhyme is a bit more forced than Kagome's but still amusing.

LMAO! "cuz then you would see my tail" oh I love it. the title makes it seem like they will never get together when they really just have some 'issues' I think that is what makes it funny.
Brenda

Not as funny as Kagome's but still funny

LMFAO!

Duude.. That would be odd.. o.O..

lolx that was funny and yet it makes sense at the same time. *laughs* I hope you have more.

Tee-hee! The poems you write are TOO CUTE!
Please, you have to make some more,
I'm your biggest fan!
Has a tee-shirt on that says:Yamisui in giant glittery words.
Just kidding... but I DO really like your poems! Make more pwese!

THERE LOVE WILL SO 2 WORK

THERE LOVE WILL SO 2 WORK