wow just wow it has everything i would look for in a great Yuffentine!

very well written and very enjoyable, i hope you continue this soon, its a great fic and i would love to read more of it :D

up date soon k

madmaz -x-

I do hope that someday you get the inspiration to finish this. I am a sucker for literate, well written Yuffentines that take all matters into account.

well, sweetie, i think you had something good going on here. i wish you had/would continue(d) on with it. its a concept with lots of potential that i really haven't seen explored anywhere else. consider coming back to this one, huh?

Very interesting! More, please? It's almost been a year...

...aw! This is just adorable - and damn good! Jeez, it's been almost a year since you last updated (ten months, twelve, what's the diff?) this, and you've got a pretty original plotline going here. Most Vincent/Yuffie's only go up to "and they lived happily ever after" and completely chuck the immortality issue.

So - pLeAsE update? Pretty please with a chibi Yuffie plushie thrown in?

Very interesting. I'm really a fave of Y/V, and you've made a fic of a serious nature about them. Touching on subjects other writers usually (or never) don't, and won't do. Though I feel that if Yuffie's going to continue aging, she'd be happy in knowing that she gave her love to Vincent, no matter how short of a time he had it, in his immortality. I can definitely see Yuffie being a very wise ruler during adulthood, with her spunky personality off course. Please continue the fic, I know it's been forever, but you MUST. Good fics like this are hard to come by. I'm beginning to sound like a broken tape.

I can honestly say that this is one of the most realistic Yuffentines I've ever read. You show the problems that would crop up with being married to the ruler of Wutai, and, unlike most, you are paying attention to the fact that Vincent doesn't age. Seeing somebody go into this with enough interest to make him try and solve the problem is a real breath of fresh air. Most fics just have a little thing about them falling in love, or getting married, (though 'a long, hard road' by Twigcollins takes the aging lack into account, they don't have Vincent try to solve the problem.) and it's good to see someone looking into the long term. Keep up the good work!

o great! Now all you got to do is update O_O

I loved it actually so much that i was so close to breaking my computer when i saw the end. *sighs* Its just like good writers to be slow. Its okay though i will be happy to see the next chapter! Thanks please continue

Bwa, I have scored a computer that lets me review. So I shall repeat what I e-mailed you with for the sake of your review count. I enjoy the way Vincent communicates, after a long-term relationship. I have faith that you'll have no troubles bringing the children into this. And you'll have NO problems with writing about their life as the rulers of Wutai, I'm sure. I hope to read more of this in the near future, but I have no problems if you feel like taking your time - in your case, the longer you take on a chapter, the better it becomes.

Hmm... interesting so far. Great bits of humor, but then, I've come to expect that of you. You did, however, hit upon a factor that has weighed heavily on my mind... the aging factor. So many people seem to like to dodge that question with a, "well the coffin put him in suspended animation" schtick... that always struck me as false. I'm glad to see you aren't taking the easy way out.
I'm certainly not.
I am somewhat disturbed by the fic starting with their relationship in full bore, with kids no less, but that's the sappy romantic in me, and I'll get over it. I am curious how it happened though. Of course, answering that question is going to probably be answered as either a, "well it just happened", or a completely seperate fic entirely... at the least it's going to be a long drawn out chapter or two... I don't think it could be handled any other way. I understand you have your own plotline probably already laid out, but that's a question that's on MY mind at least, and I wouldn't be giving you a very good review if I didn't at least mention it.
That reminds me... "Why Me?"
I'm working on the next chapter but if it's not too much trouble... you think I could toss some of my thoughts at you? Through email of course. I'm putting the request here, since this way you don't have to bother with answering me unless you want to do it... plus, it felt like it was the least I could do after the good critiques you gave me. I'm finding myself kinda stuck at this one point... aggravating as it is... you ever been in the middle of a story, with what you WANT to happen laid out all nice and cool ahead of you, what has happened done as good as you can do it behind you, but unable to figure out one little detail in the present?
Argh.
Anyway, this has been an odd rambling sort of review, and for that I apologize. Take it for what it's worth... but I doubt you'll get more then 2 cents.
Chris, DT

i think i was a very perfefect start for a sure to very god story. atleast their better then mine!

Plots ain't my strong point either. Generally I have a ramdom musem, after reading a poem, or listening to a song, and go from there... Though I am proud to say, I've got a 7 chapter fic up, that I'vr managed to keep going...
Anyways... enough random waffle...
Carry on writing!
Jenza1202 & Demonic Gunslinger

Ah, that was great! I think that their characters after 10 years seemed realistic D Good job!