great story

cool.

I'm a huge fan of The Invisible Man! I've been reading your Troy story "Unforeseen" and I couldn't resist looking at the rest of your works. This was really good and original. If the series had lasted longer I think they would've brought it up at some point.

sounds interesting is there a squeal?

You should totally continue this and have darien and claire get together using this idea:

Darien was the first to speak. "would you possibly, um, want to, um, find out what would happen if I got a woman pregnant" he said as he moved closer to her. "well," she said " of course I would like to know, but...for ... scientific purposes only, of course" she spoke slowly because darien had come very close to her. Claire looked up at him, and he smiled and said "of course; scientific purposes" he then took her hand and kissed it, then kissed her.

Afterward, darien kissed her before he left the lab. "what was that for," she asked. Darien smiled, leaned and hugged her and whispered in her ear "I didn't really do it for scientific purposes. I love you claire" He pulled away expecting her to be mad. Claire only hugged him again and whispered back " i didn't do it for science either." He pulled away with a huge smile on his face, kissed her, and left the lab. Claire went back to her desk and began working, a huge smile on

her face.

Once again, love it!

The Fan fic is cool and I hope you write another that's more expanded and longer.

awwwwww that's sweet but kind of scary...should have mentioned something like 'but that's why we're trying to get that gland out of you' or something like that would have made it better

This is a very interesting point and it makes since that Darien would ask that question. I think you did good with this fic it's different you know you raise an interesting point. Are you planning on continuing this story? Like going deeper into the question? if so that'd be cool

Oh yes! More! More more more PLEEEEEEEEEZE!

Interesting idea. I am not a Darien/Claire fan. I like Claire and Bobby. Nice job of writing.

I think that it is a really good storyline. The story brings out a lot of ethical issues. You should make a sequel or a series because the story should not stop here.

When I read it I wish it was longer. If you do a sequel or series, you should have the story follow Claire through the whole nine months of pregnancy. Also how they ended up together.

Great story! I loved the if-y ness about it, but I want to see more from you in the future. More romance, too!

Oooh... this is interesting! Is this going to have a sequel? I hope so! PPLLEEAAASSEEE!

I like how you're delving into the issue of what repercussions the gland might have on Darien's potential children; unfortunately, I don't think that the science is there to back you up. The assumption that Darien's children will be born with some sort of natural quicksilver gland is akin to assuming that the children of a man with a pacemaker or artificial heart will have a partially or totally mechanical heart themselves.

What might be interesting to see, though, is a treatment of how quicksilver itself affects the child in the womb. What if Darian had to Q/S his child's mother while she was pregnant? What if the a woman had a Q/S gland implanted, and became pregnant? What sort of effects might that have on the child? I'd be very interested in seeing what you might be able to do in this direction.