A thouroughly enjoyable read.Your writing style is very professional-great attention to spelling and grammer.So many good stories are ruined by bad spelling and/or grammer which is a shame.

I love it! I will always love a story where Grissom is hurt some way, some how.

See this is what we need much more of.

The "craving a good Gris-gets-the-crap-beat-out-of-him-and-makes-everyone-worry story"

I'm not a fanfiction reader so much, but yesterday I was awake at one of the rare moments that CSI was NOT on Spike and craving a good Gris-gets-the-crap-beat-out-of-him-and-makes-everyone-worry story so I decided to brave the yaoislash and venture over to ff.n and found your fic.

It was exactly what the doctor ordered (pun intended). Heavy on the Grissom, equally heavy on the case. You've done a great job getting all your facts straight on the forensics and obviously thought hard about the course of the investigation. The CSIs were all in character and I was surprised sometimes about how unpredictably perfect some of the responses were... like I could even hear the actor's voices.

Overall a great job, especially for your first CSI fic. It felt like a CSI novel, and I very much enjoyed it.

Very interesting..I like this story a lot, anyways keep writing more stories and keep up the good work.

great story! i loved it!!
-mystical panther

Nice story!!
I like it so much!!
Keep up the good work!!

Really good Gil and Sara writing, great over all story. Yeah you should continue with the angst of Gil and his need of physical contact.

oh poor griss! but your story was great written!

can't wait to read more of your storys!!

i'm not done reading this yet.. but i love it so far.

Wow, this is absolutely fantastic. I love it!

Your first CSI story? Wow! This was really good! It is *so* nice to actually read a story that has an actual case for the CSIs to solve, where everyone is in character, the case makes sense, and the investigators actually follow the evidence!

I also loved how you wrote Grissom--you did a fine job portraying him realistically, and not turning him into an over-emotional mess. Great job! Beautiful characterisation! And, as I said, I loved the plot--logical, calm, and actual case. VERY cool!

I'd love to see a sequel by the bye.

Just one other brief critical comment. The very end seemed to suggest Sara/Grissom romance. The tad of a suggestion is okay by me (though I personally prefer Grissom/Catherine --Sara and Grissom are too much alike to succeed as a couple), but if you DO decide to do a sequel--have it be about the prep that came after Gil--NOT a romance! Thanks1

And thanks for sharing the story--it was great. I'm telling you, you don't know how NICE it is to read a fanfic with an actual case that gets solved, rather than a mushy romance, or overly emotional angsty piece. Hurrah!!

--Olivia

Cool...very cool fic. Just came across it for the first time after the whole thing was finished. Could not 'put it down' so to speak. I do hope you plan on writing the sequel you spoke of. It would make me a happy reader. Considering this was your first fic, I am very impressed.

This story is excellent. As has been said before, you captured the personalities of each character very well, and made the story very realistic. Good job.

WOW! Of course, now I am sad that the story has ended. Hope that you are working on something else so I don't go through withdrawals. Your writing always leaves me with wanting more.
GREAT JOB!