|Reviews for Family Shame|
| Aliyah81 4/6/13 . chapter 19
I just love your gargoyle stories. I cant get enough lol. Just read this little gem a third time and its getting better and better )
| Lone Voice 11/26/12 . chapter 19
I wonder what a sequel would be like? Anyway great story!
| alichi 11/16/12 . chapter 19
So many parts brought me to tears. Been quite a while since I read a story that managed to do that time and time again.
| deathgeonous 11/3/12 . chapter 19
I haven't read this in forever. Shame, because it's really quite good. Well, thanks for writing this, bye for now.
| InkedCupcake92 10/22/12 . chapter 19
i hope you write a sequel i love this!
| skywiseskychan 4/9/12 . chapter 19
Now this is a good method of trying to revive the gargoyles as a species. Tricky though to make sure that the money and investments last at the apparent rate she's spending. Of course we never know just how much she actually has squirreled away, and it may be a self perpetuating trust, enough to cover the burden of yearly meetings and shipping etc.
| GoddessAnjanee 9/17/11 . chapter 19
loved this chapter
Will you ever write a sequel to your story 'family shame'?
Overall, family shame is one of the best stories I have ever read.
p.s. well done indeed.
| Rain Addict CM 3/4/11 . chapter 19
Another really good story! I loved the ending :) just wish they had found a way for them to have a baby of their own.
| Rickmer 10/3/10 . chapter 19
Reading your stories, I'm really getting spoiled for quality.
| WolfbrotherTitan 7/10/10 . chapter 10
I think the reason I like this story so much is because, up until this chapter, it worked within canon and yet gave us an interesting and entertaining character to follow. Original characters are naturaly harder for readers to become interested in, but Corrine and the various gargoyles of the London Clan are well developed, so ood job and thanks for the great story, this is the second time I've read it in two weeks.
| WolfbrotherTitan 7/3/10 . chapter 19
Eternal lovers doesn't really work, at leat not easily, but it does make for a great ending.
| dizzy98 4/26/10 . chapter 19
thanks for the happy ending :)
double-amazing read, as usual.
| Jaggerbox 4/19/10 . chapter 4
After reading this chapter, I'm glad that that was all a huge misunderstanding and that Una gave Corrine another chance.
This paragraph made me laugh though, since it was both something childish and mischievous:
Well, she could check back and see if the clan did anything about the nests she warned them about. Corrine sat up straighter in her chair. If not maybe she could spray paint a few of the gargoyles to make them wake up to the danger. It would make her feel better. A small smile came to her lips. Maybe she should go see if that dark gargoyle was still at home. She'd look good with a red stripe on her head and maybe some yellow polka dots.
The spray paint was pretty funny, even if she was trying to get a point across.
| Jaggerbox 4/19/10 . chapter 3
Hahaha! It's really horrible, but I laugh at how Corrine's showing the London gargoyles that they aren't all that safe, even if it does mean bad things for them.
Your original characters are one of my favorite things so far in your writing. I know that Corrine isn't canon (even though the Canmore family is) but I like how realistic you make her-if there were real rebel gargoyle hunters.
In your last paragraph, though, there's an E missing in 'stare' "Corrine normally used to star out at the stars". Definitely missing and E.
SOrry for nit-picking, but I do think that typos take away from the story, no matter how small.
| Jaggerbox 4/19/10 . chapter 2
I like this chapter if only so that Corrine has more of something to work off of. I'm glad that she's trying to work of her family debt to gargoyles.
I also like your Three-fold law. It's like some pumped up version of karma on steroids, and I wish this would happen in real life. Some of the bad things happening out there would be completely gone in a few years.
One little thing, I think that you meant to say 'fed' in the following section
"This shop has been in our clan for generations." Una glared at her. "It survived the war and kept our clan feed. I am not pleased that you've found it. I surely won't give a Canmore access to it and our clan."
It just makes more sense.
I love your writing. Out of all the fanfiction authors out there, you're one of my two favorites. :D