Reviews for Strangled Whispers

MichaelJackson'sGirl 2006-05-15 ch 1, anon.	abuseVery creepy... I like it but what would make it even scarier was if someone was reading it in complete darkness and whispering it, very good job!
Gijinka Renamon 2004-03-16 ch 1,	abuseCr e e e p y . . .
Kitsunequeen 2004-02-23 ch 1,	abuseThis is spooky.You ought to write books!^_^
anita 2003-12-04 ch 1, anon.	abuseGood spook fic!
darkdragon207 2003-12-01 ch 1,	abuseWow! This fic is SO dark and depressing, but that is a GOOD thing. I could "hear" and "feel" your tone within your poem. PERSONAL examples of writers who did the same thing include Edgar Allen Poe, Mary Shelley, Corrie ten Boom, etc. I can't pick out any mistakes, but I'm a LITTLE confused by the beginning when you wrote 'of the betrayed'. You could probably make that just a little bit clear. Apart from that, your fic was EXCELLENT! Spelling and grammar were 100% correct!:D Good Luck
MarcFan 2003-12-01 ch 1, anon.	abuseYay Samara-Chan! ^_^