This one is good!

AAW, All I can say is: T-o-o-o CUTE!! I'm absolutely at a loss 4 words!!I Mean This wasn't JUST Cute, it Actually made me wanna cry (in a good way)Coz I din't think anythink could be NEARLY as Good as ur other Fake-Fic, but U Indeed Did It!!I'm Actually Amazed into Speeclessness!!
I mean it was: Sweet, Cute, Hart-breaking and yet wonderfully Inspireing & Hart-warming ALL at the same time !!
I'm Actaully at a loss, for words cannot express how Truley Touching and Wonderfull ur Work is!!(Yess this is me at a loss for words;-D , so be Glad ur Fic was S-o-o-o-o Touching, that I'm still not quite able to Properly Praize it!All I can say is Please continue writing, for you have a life long Fan now ^-^!!

Aw... I just recently started to read FAKE and I am very glad to find such a good fanfic about it. This really captures JJ's personality.

I really liked that. i really so like JJ and i think you got his charater down so great.

I'd read this story before else where. A Masterpiece.

YAH! Go JJ! I love JJ (if you couldent tell) and I love when people write abput him (mind you I HATE it when they just right him in as an obnixious prick) but you give JJ personallty...I like that!

oh my gosh! i love the way you portrayed JJ here. its so amazing. i've come to understand him a whole lot more. he's not all that annoying really.

Oh, wow, this is really good. You captured JJ incredibly well in this. I like that you treat him as the strong character that he actually is, as opposed to the weak little uke boy that he tends to become in fanfic. Yeah, JJ is an obsessive, flamingly gay dork with horrible fashion sense. He's still a MAN though, not some little girl, and it's nice to see that brought out in a fic.

Now THAT is truly a good character sketch. I salute you. Good flow, wonderful analyzation, perfect grammar.
I have no criticisms, constructive or otherwise, at all. This is as close to perfection as one can get.

Very well written! Your wording is lovely - The final line and particulary "...her Jemmy is no fragile trinket". Great job! ^^