I just wanted to say thank you. That was one of the funniest stories I have read. I really enjoyed myself.

This was such a funny story and it seems like you were hinting on extending it. Am I right? Ooh look a baby...

That was so cute! it left me wanting to hear more adventures of the odd little pack. I loved this look at Sess. I sometimes go to an RP tag board where the regular Sesshomaru has taken in a whole hoard of adopted children. There is something so cute about mixing the cold Taiyoukai with kids.

That was soo funny. I could so imagine seeing that sienaro happening in a filler episode. Poor Jaken being attacked by a killer demon baby. *rolling on the floor laughing* Oww I think I pulled a facel mussel.

AW I LOVE THE END! MAYBE KOUGA WILL COME TRY TO RECLAIM HE AND AYAME'S CUB IN A SEQUEL? HEHEHEHEHEHE

This was great and I especially loved the ending. A little out of character for Jaken, but funny just the same. Keep writing.

Yup, this is very good. I like the action and humor a lot. The little fluffiness between Sess and Rin was cute too. I really hope you make a sequel.

I liked your story alot.It had a good mixture of humor and action,hope you add on, looked like you might?with mystery Rin.