Oh i love this story and hope the tbc will be coming soon

Hey, this is good so far, you've got an interesting plot going and I hope you'll finish it. You've got a few mistakes with regards to your tenses throughout (using have in the present tense when the rest of your story is written in the past tense, for example) but other than that it's well written and flows along nicely. It's an interesting twist on season three, hope you keep going.

how could i not have read this fic before? it's great! continue/update soon!

i just started reading this story and i luv it. keep going.
happy holidays!

Oh? What is Siddy-Poo up to??

omg omg omg! man i want more please... god please update soon! i just want more please!

yay! another chapter! it was grest, as always :)
what does vaughn have to tell lauren?!?! something to get her out of the way maybe...lol (i don't really like her...)
anyway, post again soon!

This is great! Terrific job :)

*as I settle back down with more coffee - that makes 3* Um. yeah. I CANNOT imagine why I was crazy, and said that you'd killed her. :-P HAHA NO I DO KNOW! I WIN! lol. ok, semi. you have killed her before. and I was excited about it. but at the same time, she wasn't a wife or ex-wife then. just a name on a headstone. :-D Remember yet? haha. go me. and here I thought it was coffee making me crazy. (absurd, I know.)
I just ate some little orange chocolate ball candy thing. I'm not sure how I feel about it. (that should sound familiar. lol. I think its Ambivalent Tuesday or something.) and you know, that's just what I need. caffeine AND sugar. I should hurry up and finish this review before it kicks in and I go crazy on you. ("go?" lol.) anyway. I just thought you should know, in case I don't finish this review in time. ;-)
HAHA. oh boy. well, firstly I forgot that I was bored and reviewed twice. haha. but you giving me the go-ahead to hou-email you?? :-P good to know. haha.
"She knew she would never see him again." -> Well, I AM sure what I feel about that thought. lol. um, YES SHE SHOULD!!
"When Vaughn and she met in dark warehouses. In those days when she wanted to throw him against the chain-link fence and kiss him, when a simple Christmas gift held all the emotion they could speak of." -> YAY! more of the good old days! :-) but then you abruptly went sad again. lol. of course.
"a playful suggestive tone was evident in her voice" -> *grimaces*
"but we need to tell Lauren something... something that doesn't have to do with Sydney." -> Well, I am intrigued! and I'm very optimistic. I'm a 'glass-is-half-full' kind of person, so I don't know what it is they need to tell her, but... yeah. lol. here's me hoping there's more marital strain!
woo, proud of myself, I'm moderating the caffeine/sugar really well (its kicking in). just be grateful that I only put cream in my coffee - no extra sugar there. lol. well. I will be around. but not for a little bit, I doubt. (unless our company is that boring, haha.) so Merry Christmas!

Good story, I'm very interested in knowing what happens. No offense, cause in all actuality, I hate Lauren too, but I think you're praying her a little too much like a Prima Dona. Abusing her power as an NSC assistant director, not to mention the fact that she's treating Vaughn like crap and he's putting up with it. I also think that Sydney was a little out of character at the scene at the pier. I know she was upset, but all that ranting and raving made her seem pathetic and like a person just wallowing in self pity. I still like your story though. Just a few minor comments you may want to take into consideration. :)

ho hum. here I am, not signing in, because I feel the need to review again. ;-) just to say "hi." or something. I don't know. I'm really really bored.

must have more!

so good! omg why is sydney like this? and i hate Lauren! Still u keep it real and exciting. this proves wut a great writer u are.

HAHAHA. hmm. stalking, huh? I think I called it something... less-illegal... hounding, or whatever. hahaha. same difference, I suppose. :-) hmm I hope it DOESN'T take you months to update! I wouldn't surivive that. man, if it ever gets to that... well you haven't seen any sta-HOUNDING yet! lol.
hope you enjoy it, indeed. I LOVED it! I'm so happy! even more marital tension! lol. GOOD STUFF. this is about the next-best thing you could do with Lauren, other than kill her off. oh wait! you've already done that one before! haha. :-) anyway, this is GREAT!! again... certain people should take the hint... haha.
dude, the package sydney sent was so cool! :-) oh, the good old days of that 'we should go to a hockey game' conversation, and the silent pining... that was some good stuff. maybe I should watch that! I don't have anything better to do these days (which your email inbox demonstrated to you... lol), and I do have the Season 1 dvds... :-) think I just found a plan. haha. YAY.
hmm, go vaughn, way to give the smackdown to that lynbrook! :-) that was completely enjoyable. woo!! lol. (I just realized why I'm completely hyper right now. in addition to that I see there is yet ANOTHER story I get to go read next, I've also had 2 cups of coffee and now some sprite... well that's caffeine free, I guess... whatever... today! I'm quite wired at the moment. and its not even 4pm here. man. I have issues.)
back to my point. lol. I was going to continue on, about how I'm glad that lynbrook doesn't know what sydney is really up to. WOO. hmm the man is so foul. I would've smacked him sooner, I think. :-) but that's besides the point. now you know how I am about giving you another review, just for ** and giggles. haha. I may have to see what I can do in this situation, because I have nothing on my itenerary for Saturday, and I'd like to have something to do. ;-) *winks right back at ya*

your story is great. story line is semi resonable. This particular chapter was excellent...mind games! keep updating!