awesome story! finally,. someone who likes Dun! He is so good in four, and is pretty good in three. Dun is the best of Wei. I mean, he ate his eye... update! I want to hear more about Zhou Yu and Wei Yan!

I hate you. seriously. Now I have to wait another year to get back to the Xiahou Dun goodness. Can't wait, although it appears I haven't a choice...darn.

Poor Dun! DAMN SIMA YI'S BLACK HEART! Sorry, got carried away.
I'm glad both Yuan and Liao are still on his side so to speak and of course the lovely Zhen Ji as well.
so when are all the guys going to hook up and kick some major traitor pants?

Tizight!

Great i love it and cant wait to read the next part and i cant wait for Xd to get his revenge and to get together with Zj

i think that this chapter is one of the best chapters tve read.i would rate this chapter 9 out of 10 because of the deatil in the talking parts. but i did not like it that because i like coa coa's army and lu bu's army.

*growls* where there is someone Zhuge Liang hates Wei Yan is sure to follow, and if he was dragged through the streets in manacles...*grabs a bow* okay I'm kidding. I'm kidding. Honestly.
So Wei Yan is exiled. At least Zhuge Liang can't get at him that way. Which is good.
I liek the way the generals backed him up as well as Nu Wa.
Shu does get Yue Ying in Dynasty warrior 4 as someone mentioned, but she's married to Zhuge Liang. Though I admit that makes a wonderful little love triangle. *evil grin* anyhow, I do like Nu Wa, and I'm glad to see him with her-well sorta.
As for who should be next? Why not contuine doing them in order and have itt be Dun? Or whatever is easiest for YOU to write? ^_^ ~ Nat

Hm so far so good. You're using Sun Ce?
ACK! Ugh! You killed Sun Ce? you killed surfer dude? naughty!
Zhou Yu? *ROTFL* not likely. Err is Wu going to exile him? NO!
Well at least the officers are going to help him. Though Sun Ce is probably rolling around in his grave, poor guy.
Naw, Zhou Yu needed one flaw, so a fall from grace is okay.
As for who should fall in Shu, you know who I want ^_^ or at least I'm hoping so before I go to the next chapter.

Sima Yi was always manipulative wasn't he? Evil git. Oh well, it's part of his charm. ^_^
O_O
You wouldn't do that to Dun!
*keeps on reading* Okay. You would! You're evil!
And everyone believes that DUn would do it? But Dun didn't have time to do it! *wails*
And Zhen Ji believes him as well? Hey, does she have a thing for him in this? and if so, why iss she scared of him? Surely she knows him better than that?
Cao Ming sounds like he will be trouble in the near future.
Get him Dun!
Naw it didn't seem weak. Though I did want to slap some Wei people around just a bit.

wei Yan? Well, I never expected that, totell the truth^^;
I'd been expecting Zhao Yun or Guan Yu like how the other two suggested XD (I'm just a YuxYun fan X3)
The story's still nice though^^ Poor Ce TT_TT Poor Yu TT_TT Well, at least you didn't kill him X3 (otherwise flames might really come, na? XD)

Well, well, another good chapter, Wei Yan 's in it, that's good as he kicks a**. Anyway, I think that the three should meet up with eachother and go after whoever is causing the problems. (And just to let you know, Shu has one female general, Yue Ying, although she is Zhuge's wife...) But that's DW4, and I know that you only have 2 and 3, well, anyway, sorry about the rambling, it was a good chapter, UPDATE SOON!

T.T No, Sun Ce! *sniffle* oh, dear, poor Zhou Yu got thrown out on his ear (poor guy). He'll probably meet up with Dun, right? hm... I wonder who the Shu guy will be... so far the assassinated person has either been the ruler or closely related to the ruler... does Liu Bei have any family that we know of? Well, apart from his two "brothers" (geez, I would like to see one of them bite the big one *has been playing Wei musou mode too much*)
This is very intersting! I would like to see the next chapter!

Good fanfiction. I loved it. Continue writing but I pity Zhou Yu and Sun Ce. *sob*. Let's just hope that the Shu warrior that is about to have to leave the castle is not the person whose name is quite simillar to Zhou Yu.

So, Zhou Yu and Xiahou Dun are taken. As for Shu, please let Guan Yu become the victim ! Even though he played a big role in the novel, he hardly gets any attentions in fanfiction.net (And he's mah favorite too ! Poor Yun Chang...). Update soon, and don't forget my request !

Very cool. I definitly can't wait for the next chapter.Very cool.