This story is GOOD... can somebody PLEASE continue working on it?

very very cool! neat idea, and well written.

updates good

Interesting, very interesting, there are so many possibilities for this story, and your writing style is very good, I hope you continue with this story soon

Peace Out

-Trampus

this is a great tale
what could hapen when the story's sentinel encounter others sentinels?
the sentinel will be capable to interface whith matrix?
the protocols of security(attack deffence) are damget? what could hapen when the other members of the ship will intent attack the centinel?

i'm just asking do you know how big a sentinal is. and another question my story takes place 45 years after the events of revilutions and in that their is more than one ship around the tunnels and i'm wondering if their are going to be any other ships shown later
thanx

Interesting. More, more, more! Please?

Just wanted to say that I have really enjoyed this piece so far! I'm always happy to see when people decide to explore more of the 'road less traveled', especially machine - human interactions. I personally think Sentinels are very cool, and I feel you're doing a damn good job writing a fic based in the 'real' world.
I can't wait to read the next installment!

grovy totally shibby, cool but the clothing didn't seem matrix like ckeck mine out