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| Terry L. Gardner 2006-02-02 ch 1, | abuseWow. This story is powerful and tenderly moving. Its beautiful. |
| lovecelest 2004-07-05 ch 1, | abuseThis was kind of neat. I don't understand about the out of time thing though, it's like a weird concept thing. And then he can kiss her out of time after that? But thanks. |
| CottageGhost 2003-12-02 ch 1, | abuseWhat a terrific story! The whole day at the fair is just wonderful, and you had me laughing at the Captain's expression in the rollercoaster :) I also liked the way your story segues into the events of "The Music Maker", leading to the wonderfully inescapable conclusion. Thanks so much for another wonderful read! Chantal |
| Helena Russel 2003-12-02 ch 1, | abuseVery terrific story, Susan. One of my all time favorite story of yours, too. Anne |
| Melchy 2003-12-02 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis is one of my all time favorite stories of yours. I just love the fact of these two getting to spend a day together with no problems, concerns and no Claymore! And what a way to end a perfect day. Thanks. |