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Reviews For: Going to the Fair

Terry L. Gardner
2006-02-02
ch 1,
abuseWow. This story is powerful and tenderly moving. Its beautiful.
lovecelest
2004-07-05
ch 1,
abuseThis was kind of neat. I don't understand about the out of time thing though, it's like a weird concept thing. And then he can kiss her out of time after that? But thanks.
CottageGhost
2003-12-02
ch 1,
abuseWhat a terrific story! The whole day at the fair is just wonderful, and you had me laughing at the Captain's expression in the rollercoaster :) I also liked the way your story segues into the events of "The Music Maker", leading to the wonderfully inescapable conclusion. Thanks so much for another wonderful read!
Chantal
Helena Russel
2003-12-02
ch 1,
abuseVery terrific story, Susan. One of my all time favorite story of yours, too.
Anne
Melchy
2003-12-02
ch 1, anon.
abuseThis is one of my all time favorite stories of yours. I just love the fact of these two getting to spend a day together with no problems, concerns and no Claymore! And what a way to end a perfect day.
Thanks.
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