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Reviews for: Merry Christmas
Duco Lacuna
2008-07-20 . chapter 1
Ah... That made me smile greatly! I loved how you wound in all the prompts. They fit perfectly and I enjoyed your excellent capturing of the characters' different and sometimes clashing personalities (Lucius V.S Everyone else, basically!)

I really liked the ending where Lucius gets knocked out and Pomfrey says "- he’s getting to spend Christmas with his son, no matter what. Just as he wanted.”

Great fun!
Hogaboom
2005-10-03 . chapter 1
kl write more
kidarock
2005-06-10 . chapter 1
Oh good job, i like pomfrey's last line!
Syndromia
2004-06-21 . chapter 1
Random, yet pretty much in character! I loved it! Please write more like it *gives Natalilly sad puppy eyes*
Ivory Tower
2003-12-04 . chapter 1
A most wonderful story! You kept Lucius in wonderful character! Write more Lucius stories!
Catspook
2003-12-02 . chapter 1
Col! Such an origional storyline, and you nailed the characters. Write another chapter; I'd love to read about Pomfrey having to deal with both Draco and Lucius (he he).
LinZE
2003-12-02 . chapter 1
LOL - go girls!
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