 Duco Lacuna 2008-07-20 . chapter 1Ah... That made me smile greatly! I loved how you wound in all the prompts. They fit perfectly and I enjoyed your excellent capturing of the characters' different and sometimes clashing personalities (Lucius V.S Everyone else, basically!)
I really liked the ending where Lucius gets knocked out and Pomfrey says "- he’s getting to spend Christmas with his son, no matter what. Just as he wanted.”
Great fun! |
 Hogaboom 2005-10-03 . chapter 1kl write more |
 kidarock 2005-06-10 . chapter 1 Oh good job, i like pomfrey's last line! |
 Syndromia 2004-06-21 . chapter 1Random, yet pretty much in character! I loved it! Please write more like it *gives Natalilly sad puppy eyes* |
 Ivory Tower 2003-12-04 . chapter 1A most wonderful story! You kept Lucius in wonderful character! Write more Lucius stories! |
 Catspook 2003-12-02 . chapter 1 Col! Such an origional storyline, and you nailed the characters. Write another chapter; I'd love to read about Pomfrey having to deal with both Draco and Lucius (he he). |
 LinZE 2003-12-02 . chapter 1LOL - go girls! |