itz good, my fave line is 'I'll take the fire and make the world burn.' you could try next time go deeper, just some advice. english is ma worst subject o

coool!

That was very impressive!

COOL! I love it! A bit short, but I'm not one to talk! Keep it up!

I like this one.

Wow, this was very well written. The line usage here is wonderful. Even the rhythm was good, draws you into the poem. To tell the truth, I think your point of view, what it's actually like, and mine, are the same. Oh well, I'll stop babling, you keep writing. _

-Kira

Wow! I've always pictured it to feel something like that... I could definitely seen that from my Gohan's point of view. _

You were right, I DO like this poem.

nothing to do with DBZ

oooooooooooooooooooooooooo cool!

Wooaahh...that was cool

Wow. I am very impressed. This is great! _

Cool poem. Makes me respect the power of a Super Saiyan even more when the pain they go through is described that way. Two thumbs up! )

Not bad at all. This is a nice, concise poem, and I think it describes the transformation well.

One little point: "its" should be written "it's" (the correct contraction of "it is.")

Wow that's...that's wonderful it's so true and beautiful.