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Aria DC al Fine
2009-01-27 . chapter 1
Aw...my heart becomes goo... I always, always love Kenshin/Tomoe...I only managed to somewhat find Kenshin/Kaoru okay after watching Seishouhen...poor Kaoru loves and loves and loves Kenshin so much to the point that she wants to share his disease but Kenshin cant stop wandering around Japan and leaving her...cant forget Tomoe and his guilt and her marks, both visible and in the mind (That just proves how much Kenshin loves Tomoe in canon!)

Ahem. ANyway, the 'silence' part needs to be more pronounced, methinks...drawn and awkward...but otherwise I like this fic.
TK
2006-02-10 . chapter 1
*sob* Wonderful.. Just a wonderful story. So touching. I am in love with them even more. We don’t get a lot of Kenshin and Tomoe love story. Not a big fan of Kenshin and Kaoru. I really like the way you used Kenshin real name as their son name.

He looked into his mirror as he dressed into his wedding tuxedo and saw his reflection. He saw flecks of his mother and his father in himself and then the future became more uncertain for he was going to get married within an hour.

Just read that just want to burst in tears. Keep up the great work.
Inu-chan8970
2006-01-21 . chapter 1
Please don't stop writing Tomoe/Kenshin fics, you're really great at writing them!
RoseThorn
2004-09-04 . chapter 1
That was wonderful! I've been a fan of the pairing of KenshinXTomoe for quite some time now, and this was an absolutely wonderful fanfic. Great job! I hope to see more fanfics by you in the future, especialy KxT ones. ^_^
hakubaikou
2004-09-02 . chapter 1
I enjoyed this one very much. I've always loved that about Kenshin and Tomoe, their quiet, understated relationship. It's one of my favorite aspects of RK. This story was very sweet.
Crystal Snowflakes
2004-07-05 . chapter 1
Wow...
Gothic-doll
2004-03-22 . chapter 1
THis story was so cute...she reall express the love that Tomoe and Kenshin had for each other. You should write more fics. and can u read my fic...your is way better than mine..
^^
aikawarazuai
2004-03-09 . chapter 1
ooh !! this one has made me have warm and fluffy insides ^-^ i LOVE it! so romantic
Crimson Snow
2004-01-23 . chapter 1
Aw so cute! TomoexKenshin forever!
xinderella
2003-12-28 . chapter 1
very sweet. i love it.
Wistful-Eyes
2003-12-27 . chapter 1
That was very very sweet. What I really like was the message you conveyed: that though Kenshin and Tomoe didn't really seem to smile so much at each other and act all giggly and loveydovey, they really do love each other and they DEFINATELY don't need to act like that towards another to show that they're in love. Their love shows in the quiet comfort they have in each other...*sigh* That's why I love K+T...anyway, this was very good. You did a very good job. ^_^
Generic Gen
2003-12-03 . chapter 1
BRAVO! Very thoughtful and insightful- what *would* a child's reaction be to Kenshin's and Tomoe's relationship? Nicely thought out- that lass part was expecially cute.
Kenkaya
2003-12-03 . chapter 1
Wow!
Now I'll be the first to admit I don't really like Tomoe. She was sadly underdeveloped in both the OVA and manga (though I perfer that version of her) and angsty ice queens just never did rock my boat. I also am a die-hard Kenshin/Kaoru fan, but I like how you wrote this. The style was clean and the message at the end sweet. You protrayed the emotions with realistic honesty. I applaud you just for the fact that you got me to enjoy a Kenshin/Tomoe fic. The only thing I would suggest is maybe researching the Japanese education system at the time to give it a more authetic feel, but that didn't really take away from the story.
Keep up the writing!
kikyiou_666
2003-12-02 . chapter 1
Wow. That was very well written. Simple structure, I like that. I think that you described kenshin and tomoes relationship beautifully. I got warm fuzzy tingles ^_^.
Why did you say that you would never write another kenshin/tomoe fic? If anything you should write more! please? ^_^
Forlorn Maiden
2003-12-02 . chapter 1
That was amazing! I can't believe that you thought about stopping to write K/T you're a talented author and you should continue to write K/T fanfictions.
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