|Reviews for Regret|
| Lucrecia LeVrai 1/24/05 . chapter 1
Last line - simply perfect. An excellent example of powerful angst.
| Tsuyunoinochi Koukyo 1/28/04 . chapter 1
I'm guessing you're talking about Squall, correct? This one almost made me cry, if I were not in school.
| DUNOTS 1/19/04 . chapter 1
It's like poetry, only with the utility of prose.
Anyway, I'm glad to find someone dealing with the "darkest" version of the truly vague ending of FFVI.
It's the one I like best.
-Forrest "DUNOTS" Walker
| myeerah 12/3/03 . chapter 1
You always seem to pack a very heavy punch into just a few, spare sentences. This is no exception. I remain impressed by your talent.
| Finding Beauty 12/1/03 . chapter 1
I’ve become quite a fan of your work since I first read your piece “Lacuna,” and I have to say my opinion of your writing never falters — it’s quite wonderful. I love the direct, poignant way you manage to convey emotions with your characters, without making it seem overdone or too drawn out, or melodramatic in the least.
This little ficlet, I was even more impressed because . . . well, Laguna isn’t a character one usually thinks of as ‘angsty,’ but you write his angsting moments better than just about anyone I can think of. It only makes sense that someone typically so cheerful would have to be down *sometimes*. But I digress.
I love this, really. At first I thought it might have been Squall, but when I realised it was Laguna, it struck me as unbelievably . . . well, wonderful. It’s going on my favourites list — and I wish you would write more featuring Laguna.
| Kitian 12/1/03 . chapter 1
Regret and words left unspoken...one of the saddest things you could choose to write about, really. This piece sobered me right up; realistic, morose, and so matter-of-fact about the whole damned thing I couldn't help but be sad, for both parties.
Possibly your shortest piece ever, there wouldn't be much to criticize even if I wanted to, so I'll simply let you know it was powerful, moving, and quite tragic. All in 361 words. I must say, you're getting quite good at fitting in tons of good ficcage (...it's a word, I swear) into so few words. I'm impressed.
| Kursed SeeD 12/1/03 . chapter 1
Oh...this was such a *beautiful* piece... you are truly an amazing writer... just... wonderful...