Darkstar - Listen you **, if you were a true Final Fantasy fan you would know that there are two Final Fantasy Is! There is one for the SNES too, you dolt! The NES and SNES version are different, but FFI and FFVI are the same game. So go do some research before flaming a fiction **! And another thing, the loading time in FFVI are slow before FFI is an SNES game and putting it on PS just ** it up! Compare it to other FFs or look it up online, anyone will tell you it's slow!
Last thing, it's sad that you didn't have the balls to log-in or at least sign-up. So up YOURS jackass!

Okay, I'm done. Great fiction, I loved the way you wrote it! Love the way you did Celes character. Kudos! :)

NO! that a great game.And if you knew anything you'd know it IS ff6 NOT ff3
NES-FF1 (FF2) (FF3)
SNES- FFMQ FF4 (FF5) FF6
Playstation- FF7 FF8 FF9
Playstation2-FF10 FF10-2 FF11 FF12 *coming soon*
Gamecube- FFCC
(only in japan)
AND THE LOADING TIME IS NOT SLOW!
I'd know I just bought it a few days ago.
UP YOURS **!

Ah, neat! Celes X Kefka, not so weird in my mind! I dare say I approve. It definately makes sense, with her delusions of her actions why she would love the man who gave out those commands. Intriging, even! I hope that you'll be able to continue soon. ^.^
aha, I found just one thing: Miranda = Maranda. ^_~ hehehe. Actually two, but this one may just be me thinking too much. The fact that Celes refers to Christ seems strange to me, since their does not seem to be any real "religions" in FFI. I suppose it'd be seen as more of a mythic "powerful creature" kind of thing. (lol, though I don't think they'd say "oh my moogle!" or anything like that. XD) those are the only two things that really stood out to me that took my mind away from the story. =) Great job Stephuls!