really interesting starting. a little hard to read 'cause of the lack of line spacing and what not, but it's great so far.

great chapters
i love this story for many reasons ... one of them being it is originality ... can't wait for more

Hi! I'm a new reader and it's also my first review ever! I love your story and I prefer your new format, it's easier to read.
Do you have something better for antonio than just complain all the time?? because I find it annoying but I guess you have your reasons to keep it that way and I'll just have to read the next chapters and I can't wait!! I love the twist when chad proposed to simone I realy want to see how it turns out! oh when we're going to know the identity of sarah's father??
cool work romantic shade of blue!

Good job girl, update soon.

I like this story, it's interesting Whitney should totally not forgive Chad either way, i really dont like him (lol) anyway...keep up the good work!

It's still a great story. For the next chapter, I would love for Gwen to remember everything and accidentally tell Hank that Sarah isn't Ethan's daughter...

Damn the bastard gor free! And wow, Chad will be marrying or attempting to marry Simone in a ways of getting Whitney back...Interesting, continue!

This is getting good! Please update soon!

Maybe I am stupid, and you probably have this somewhere, but I don't remember, is there a realtionship at all between Fox and Theresa? I am guessing they are friends, but nothing else, right? I guess I will find out! I really hope Theresa's answer is 'no'! Therox Now and Forever!!

hmm..im really interested to find out what's on the paper that chad gave to whitney. great update!

Like it, like it like it! I can't wit to see what happens next ;)

I wish it was a Therox fic, but I am really happy at the presents he got both of them! He is showing his love for both of them! I guess I will continue on! Update soon!

Wonderful chapter Update soon. I am loving this story so far.

Good job girl like always you show everyone how talented you are!

This story is getting better by the minute. I can't wait to read the next chapter. As for the identities of the revealers, I can very well know that One of them is a Crane girl and the other is Evian's long-lost son.