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| Celestra 2001-09-03 ch 1,  | abuseI play recorder! It is almost exactly like the flute! It's old, yet still good. However, there ARE mysterious dents near the mouthpiece which I don't know how they got there . . . By the way, I threw the banana! Meeeeeeeeeeeeeeee! Eeep, I do believe I see Kim coming . . . Ja, baby! |
| Creedogmon 2001-04-06 ch 1, anon. | abuseOkay. It's pretty good. I like the part of each DigiDestined having an instrument. You chose wisely. But, they're no plot (although, this fic didn't seem to need one, so it's okay) and you are repetative when you describe the playing of each person, to the point to corniness. It just didn't have your usual effect. Sorry if this seems like a flame. I just meant it to be constructive critism. |
| Lys-chan 2001-01-04 ch 1, anon. | abuseKakkoi!!! FLUTES!!! FLUTES RULE!!! *grabs her own, multiple times dented but still shiny Flute* I play tooooooo!!! I'm in a special Arts school cuz I'm so good ^_^ Not bragging, just the only thing I'm good at... ^_^ Great ficcie, i LUV! HAH! TAKARI FOREVER AND EVER! *dances around screaming* TAKARI!!! FREE THE SHEEP!!! |
| DigiDragonLord 2001-01-03 ch 1, anon. | abuseGREAT, the only thing i found surprising is the fact you gave Ken a accordian. If you can i think it would be entertaining to get a sequal. |
| Ducky 2001-01-03 ch 1, anon. | abuseOh I had the same idea, 'cept I was thinkin' of a rock band. Oh well really good story! I would like to know where you saw that pic of the Digi-Destined in a band. |
| Amiasha 2001-01-03 ch 1, anon. | abuseNo stalking! It's not nice. *Grins maniacly* I liked this a lot. it was really funny when Matt and Tai got into *sigh* another fight. The choice of instruments was cool too. I liked it. |