| Reviews for What Comes Next |
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Burnz 12/6/07 . chapter 1Nicely done vignette. :) |
Al Rush 12/27/03 . chapter 1 Sorry about taking so long to review, the Holidays is a source for great insanity. Looks like a promising beginning. I think more actual dialog between characters would help though. |
duj 12/2/03 . chapter 1 Very promising fic, great start and interesting perspective. One thing you could improve however is the occasional clumsy construction, eg 1) the repetition of "look/looked" in "It was hard to look at Spike’s face like that. He looked the way she looked." 2) "from/as it" in "Spike moved his hand from it... She wondered if she felt the same as it.." |
Allyson 12/2/03 . chapter 1 Excellent work! - a very well-written and poignant little look at the aftermath of Buffy's death. I enjoyed the parallels between Dawn and Spike. And Dawn trying to figure out what to do with her dress was a nice Stuff! |
Claire Starling 12/2/03 . chapter 1Wow-ch. Too good fics in one day. Wonderful, dearest. More soon. |