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Madam Bones
2008-04-20
ch 1, anon.
abuseAh, my fine friend. I see the universe has it in for me. This is a new and nearly unthinkable level of cruel and unusual punishment. This story, the whole series, is amazing. And I know that you have, or had, put this on hold to further your other works, but this is really something amazing and so well developed. I urge you, no, I beg you to consider starting up again. I don't know if you've finished writing, but to have come so far, so many years and so many chapters, and so many installments that have reached so many people, and to stop now would be a terribly sad way to end this. Please, please don't give up now. This is an amazing plot line with amazing characters. It would be such a shame to see it all disappear. The last story ended so well, but there are still so many loose ends to be tied, so many pranks to be played, so many journeys and plots and emergencies and accidents and rescues to be made. Please consider updating this wonderful story line. The first chapter, and hopefully the first in a great many, if you do begin again, was excellent and at the same time so very foreboding. I must go now, but I beg you to hear my pleas. Thank you for hearing me out. Here's to hoping that you are inspired to begin again.
Always Yours,
And Hopefully for a Long Time to Come,
~Madam B.~
rednekS
2008-04-17
ch 1, anon.
abuseHe didnt kill harry... permanently, if you pay attention to the second installment DECADES later harry and ginny go back to act like the crazy DADA teachers which means harry has to survive or come back from the dead or somethin in his seventh year at hogwarts although i admit it was a nice twist and start to the third of the series
wingnut1974
2008-04-14
ch 1,
abuseI really hope you return to this story I really would like to see how the rest of it pans out
PLease please please come back to it
Ham-the-first
2008-04-04
ch 1,
abuseDude HECK YEAH! 3rd "book" AWESOME! Man... this is gonna be good.
horsinaround94
2008-03-07
ch 1,
abusePlease, please, please finish this! I REALLY want to know what hapens! PLEASE?!
Chaosmagi
2008-03-03
ch 1,
abuseSo... uh... Are you gonna continue this? You can't just kill off Harry, then not continue the story. Please continue this very, very soon!
fred2008
2008-02-28
ch 1,
abuseOk, its been what? *looks at celander and clock* five years now since this was started? Right when everything was and is getting interesting you decided to ditch this story? well i'm not the author so i'll just have to settle with that was some nice work you written.
Agar Loki
2008-02-17
ch 1,
abusethis is really sad! I just finished reading 'Order of the Phoenix' and 'Well of Shadows' and I find out that you're writing about Harry's seventh year, and then there's only one chapter...I am really kinda disappointed because the other two were finished years ago. You don't even say that it's been discontinued. This series is amazing, and I haven't been able to do much else but read it. I know that I read 'Order of the Phoenix' years ago, but never came back to see anything about a sequel until last week when I went to reread OotP. If there's any way to just even email it to me if you've got it finished, I would love to read the next instalment of your series. Thanks.


~Agar Loki~
Sanaro
2008-01-31
ch 1, anon.
abuse"..."
You.. actually... killed... Harry...
...
*gapes*
This.. could be interesting...
Also, I hate to point it out, but shouldn't Draco (I'm assuming it IS Draco) currently be more suited to drooling and babbling than breaking peoples arms (though I'll admit that the latter is more in character... maybe)
Unless the book the Proteuses planted somehow made it so that he'll recover from the brain dammage?
Anyways, brilliant start to the book, please update ASAP.. we're all on tenterhooks here.
(P.S. - Why do I get the feeling Ginny's going to blast a hole in Voldemort that you could fit a Hippogriff through in revenge?)
(P.P.S. - please include some flashbacks to the holidays - I bet Harry and Ginny had.. fun.. during their summer break... *smirks*)
Ciao!
luvisintheair46
2008-01-20
ch 1, anon.
abuseah! cliffie! you so have to continue! wow your stories are so amazing... i just Ootp and the sequel today and they are so great!! please continue! HURRY!
Gryphon494
2008-01-16
ch 1,
abuseI take it that after a few years this won't be updated, which is really a shame. I came across a few of your fics, Backwards Compatible being the first one. And then I decided to check out the others. I love your writing style, and Harry is awesome as well. I really hope you can update, I shall await with baited breath. XD Keep up the sterling work.
KuroNoTenshi
2008-01-06
ch 1,
abuseIt ends? It just ends? How can they go back and be professors if Harry dies?!?
You're evil is unsurpassed...
SilentWhisperWolf
2008-01-04
ch 1,
abusewha? whas happening? that's a cliffhanger! no! well, i don't think I'll beg, cry or threaten you to update since you appear to have about 500 reviews doing that already, but I must say, good job on the story.

The first chapter was great by the way!
watcher
2008-01-04
ch 1, anon.
abuseYou realize how evil you are, don't you?
Shulblaka Saphira
2008-01-04
ch 1,
abuse...oh **...You killed Harry. I can't believe you killed Harry...You'll bring him back of course, but still...You killed Harry...

I loved Draco's thought though. "I did it." Very nice touch for the ending. Though Draco's fit was just as awesome...Keep up the good work and update soon!
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