Amazing...shocking...and purely beautiful.
As a comment on Watari's psyhological state, there is no defining proof that he isn't as ** up as the rest of them, really. They just haven't shared his past yet. And honestly, if you read the manga, he sometimes shows another side, a much more serious side. So as far as I'm concerned, you portrayed him just damn fine.
Fav'd.

I'd like to thank you for not writting these characters so two-dimensionally. It gets so bland when you've got a story with a constantly bubbly Watari and a tight-assed Tatsumi, because every now and then, we all need to pull a Hisoka or a Terazuma no matter what the main personality is. That and it just adds more flavor to the character.

I don't know why, but I was cracking up when Watari threatened to stab Tsuzuki with pens. xD

How do we know for sure that Watari doesn't have a tragic past like everyone else seems to? They haven't evn TALKED about it yet in the manga!

Really well done! I loved it entirely. I like how you delve into Watari's emotions and show the reader a side seldom acknowledged. Great fic. Humourous and romantic and just plain adorable.

Beautiful. I love how you managed to show how complex all the characters are, even the ones that got very little "on screen" time in the fic.

I think that was a good fic. Justafiable too. ^_^
I love Watari! Poor underated little kook of a scientist.

I love your work and I really like this story. I just wanted to say that. Keep writing and I'll keep readin , thanks!!

I loved this! This was beautifully crafted and its mezmorizing! I truely adore the TatsxWata pairings! And this just captivated it so perfectly. I loved it! ^_^

WOW. Now this is something I want from Wat/Tat story... I seriously fell in love with this story, and also, even more with this beautiful pairing I've always loved... ^^ THANKS KAWAII LI'L LIA for writing this beautiful fanfic! It made me smile for happiness, seriously!

Ah, good old TatsWat. I liked it, some parts of it were quite funny, others sweet, and so on. To me, it's one of the best TatsWat fanfictions I've read so far. Good work.
~Ace of Time
PS - It's going on my favourites list.

Wow. This is one of the best Watari/Tatsumi stories I've ever read. I love the characterization! ^_^

Sorry, didn't feel much like logging in. GREAT STORY! And you're right, Watari should be able to pull a 'Hisoka' every now and then. Wonderful character interactions, dialouge, snippets of humor, and my personal favorite, Watari/Tatsumi. Keep writing please!!

Wow! What an amazing piece! I'm very impressed! ^^ Very impressive; I like the way you kept Tatsumi in character, and I loved angst!Watari. So, as of right now, I'm going to read your other works.
Keep it up, ne?
-- R.C. McLachlan

beautiful. you did justice to Watari-san's personality. ^^
kekeke >=3 will we really have to wait for "Total Armageddon?"

Aww! *loves* There are so many brilliant lines in this - the floating shoujo flowers, total armageddon... I fell off my chair giggling. :) Great way to use Watari's power, too, with the pens. And the description of Watari sitting at the window... poor thing! And Tatsumi is too cool for words. Great fic, I'll look forward to seeing more of your writing. :)