A great story. Very good.

The angst is so heavy. But it is well written, and a great exploration of that time in their lives - I always wonder if things were meant to get much much better after You're Welcome but they had to abandon that to end the series.

I dunno about more of the same. This is a well done job on its own. It might be good - but it could also be repeating that 'lost' theme over and over.

Sdrive: Wow, you can write something serious, lol. Just joking. This was ewxtremely good. Even though I have know clue what the whole series is about, or who the characters are, or who the girl is talking about, I get the feelings of sadness for her. And i could visualize it all perfectly.
Shi: i thought it was good too, all the depressing angst.
Sdrive: Shut up. She doesn't even know who you are or how you came to be so just stay out of this review for once. SO this was a really good story. I think you should make it into a series. That's all for now.
Power to the Hikari's

Wow. I really enjoyed this story, the idea was amazing and although Fred was a little bit too angsty for me to really see her as Fred, she was human, and wonderfully done. The series idea is good, and I can't wait to see the rest.