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| pears 2008-07-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseHoly, there are a lot of spelling mistakes in this chapter! :P You need to look up words if you're unsure of their spelling or just get a better word processor, my friend, because horrendous spelling is the type of writing flaw that can completely turn readers off of a story, regardless of the potentially fantastic plot. ...but I see you haven't updated since 2004, so if you even read this, you've probably already improved spelling-wise by now (hopefully)! |
| Smm91 2008-02-13 ch 11,  | abuseUpdate soon!! :D |
| Lady-Serena-Snape 2006-10-08 ch 11, | abusePlease update again soon. I really love your story. Serena |
| OrionLuckyStar 2006-05-16 ch 11, | abuseare you ever going to up-date? i love this fic and it would be a real sham to not continue it! get back to me on it will ya? |
| sitt 2006-03-18 ch 11, anon. | abusei really like this story and i hope you will be updating soon and often i look forward to reading more wonderful work |
| sweetteetwo 2005-12-27 ch 11, | abuseplease up date real soon this fic is awesome I love how in the future Harry haves to come to grips about Snape and him in a relationship. and in 1996 Snape haves to come to grip with his relationship with Harry. |
| animehpgurl 2005-12-03 ch 11, | abusegood fic. |
| Pure Black 2005-09-13 ch 11, | abusegood story! |
| mello1 2005-09-02 ch 11, anon. | abuseI've just found and read this story; I love it. I certainly do wish you would continue it - it is so original in so many aspects. |
| mello1 2005-09-02 ch 11, anon. | abuseI've just found and read this story; I love it. I certainly do wish you would continue it - it is so original in so many aspects. |
| Megami284 2005-08-06 ch 11, | abuseI really like this story. I think that you should really update it because it's really good. You have loyal fans who want to see the rest of this story so I think that you should update it. |
| GryffRavHuffSlythendor 2005-08-04 ch 11, | abuseI like it but i don't know why Harry doesn't remember anything...the other Harry (32) remembers everything. |
| A-non 2005-05-01 ch 11, anon. | abuseThis story appears to be well thought out, though a few of the scene jumps seem a bit awkward. I really do hope that you continue with this work, it has wonderful potential. |
| HD please 2005-04-11 ch 11, | abusethumbs up for this one 2 but i still like crown of thorns trilogy better |
| jaws 2005-03-27 ch 11, anon. | abusehello i just read this one too how many of ur sotries is that now i dont no ah well im going to say it again ur a good writer well, till the next story bye. jaws |