Guess what I like your Yayoi more than the one in the anime! She's so protective of Riho and it's sweet of her to offer her blood to Shido. So unlike the bitchy Yayoi in the anime :P

That was really good. I hope you are thinking about writting more. I would love to see your take on the show and how things would go if you owned it.

Fangtastic! please continue to post your work.
Loving wisely comes from making up both heart and mind.

Nice
There's not many fics about Yayoi and her thoughts out there, so that really adds to the appeal of this, not to mention you're great writing!
Cheers!
LivEviL

I LOVE IT!_