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| aquafina rain 2003-12-01 ch 11, | abuseNYWAHAHAHAAHA~ And, because of this, many of my friends suffer from ym ramblings about Chrono Trigger. *sweatdrop* Yuss, really. -This- is the real reason to whyich I haff BECOME ADDICTED. SO YEY FOR YOU. *glomp* Anywho, putting that aside, I love this. It has a talking Crono that Crono...ish! Yay! And Frog's character's so luffable in here... To tell you the truth, I've only played the beginning of Secret of Mana. Yeah. I got lost. e_E After visitng that, um, first Temple you have to go to. *coughcough* Yes, I am a bit challenged like that. BUT if it weren't for this absolutley -FANTASTIC- piece of work-you makie me jealous, Jade-chan!-I wouldn't have even given it a second glance. Nope. No siree. So... be proud of yourself! You hath unleashed a demon! Sorta. Now, back to what I was saying-pure genius. The whole plot and how they(Crono&Co) got there. ABSOLUTLEY FRIGGIN GENIUS. Yuss, capitalization... anyway, plot twists here and tehre, good for the mind, nice little touches of Marle... Yeah, I'd say this is a great fic. *nodnod* So... yey. I'll stop typing now. |
| Jemsy 2002-07-19 ch 12, | abuseOoooooooooooooh I LOVED IT!!! I thought your whole philosophy on Mana was very interesting and creative. I'm also glad you brought the sprite back! You portrayed the Scorpion Army just the way I pictured them as I played through the game, and even before they were revealed the thought passed quickly through my head that the 2 mystery minions sounded like the idiots from the Scorpion Army, hehehe. I just don't get why Charis didn't become the tree already o_O? Oh well, it was a good story anyways and I wish there was another great Secret of Mana story that was COMPLETE out there in the land of fanfiction to read! Well, I'm working on one but it is far from complete and I have a lot of revision to make to it and blah blah blah. Great story and keep up the good work and all that good shiznit! Bye bye! |
| Jemsy 2002-07-19 ch 6, | abuseSince I'm halfway through the story, I decided to review a bit. ^_^ OK, well let me start out by saying I am practically OBSESSED with Secret of Mana! It is one of my four main obsessions, but probably the biggest seeing as how I own the soundtrack and all. Anyways, I have never played Chrono Trigger or whatever the other game is (sorry) but I'm glad this story is in the world of Mana. Makes it easier to understand and much more enjoyable for me, so THANKIES! Great job leading me on to think Joch was the bad guy... Also, the griffin-like boss seemed a lot like another boss in the game Illusion of Gaia for SNES as part of the Soul Blazer series. They both shot feathers like knives o_O In my opinion, despite the numerous grammar errors, I am loving this story! I think I will go read the rest of it now and I'm hopeful that my favorite character, the sprite, will make an appearance maybe perhaps... ONWARD! |
| JojoDark 2002-03-13 ch 1, | abuseOi I thought I reviewed this fanfic! O.o Guess I was too lazy to log in and review...I read this a while ago on a sick day...on the weekend...-_-. But theres nothin like a good crossover to make life taste better! Is it me or does Glenn look like Chrono and Charis looks like Marle... Coincidence? I DON'T THINK SO!^o^ |
| aquafina rain 2002-01-21 ch 12, | abuseI absolutley lub it! Verdy Verdy VERDY good! ^-^ |
| LadyD 2002-01-08 ch 12, | abusethat was a great story. i like the names you picked for hte characters...are they the names you gave when you played secret of mana? anywho, keep up the good work....btw, after like the third chapter i assumed joch to be magus...it was predictable...to me anyway |
| Girl-chama 2001-10-25 ch 12, anon. | abuseI think that the best way to end this would be to say that if I had written this story, I would have done it in the exact same manner that you have. And now I am off to conquer SoM once again! I need this story to be in game version!!! X.x!! |
| Girl-chama 2001-10-25 ch 10, anon. | abuseKIKUO!!!!! *bursts into happy, blubbering hysterics* |
| Girl-chama 2001-10-25 ch 4, anon. | abuseWell, it IS interesting to wonder how they're going to get through the Pure Land without the protection of Dryad and Lumina. Sorry, I just LOVE that game. Is Kikuo going to come back? You seem to have worked all the way around him, and he was totally my favorite character!! Also, is that supposed to be the Scorpion Army (the two shady figures)? |
| mystlady 2001-10-10 ch 12, | abuseMystical Jade!! Wow, you're awesome!! I love this crossover fic so much!! This is really remarkable... It's been a long time I've seen a really good SOM crossover... I've been wanting to write SOM crossover but it's just died within me I guess, I no longer have the inspiration to write... Very sad for me cause' I still have some unfinished stories left behind but I'm trying my best to do.. There are somedays that I feel totally not into writing anymore. |
| TwilightZone1 2001-09-10 ch 1, | abuseWho's your fav Chrono trigger character? Mine's Magus! ^^ I love Chrono Trigger 2! Great Story see ya! ^ ~ |
| Ra'akone 2001-08-24 ch 12, | abuseThat was an interesting story. I liked the connections. Well, I noticed too many "similarities" between characters of those two games myself. I liked the names you chose for the Mana characters (did you know that in the original Japanese version, the "Mana Knight" was Randi, the girl was Purim, and the sprite was Popoi?) Oh yes, I'm a Schala freak, did I tell you that? *hehehe* ~Ra'akone |
| Velasa 2001-06-19 ch 4, | abusefirst off- Sorry for not reading this in so long! *sweatdrops* I sort of forgot about it.... well, I'm back now, and this is getting interesting. The only problem is..... I can't remember a number of the SOM chars, it's been so long.... and I've got this weird premonition that the magician dude is.... Magus. o_O It's late now though... I WILL come back tommorow. ciao. |
| Ariskari 2001-06-04 ch 1, | abuseI like a lot. Couldn't think of anything else to say. I just wanted to add this story to my favorites |
| Dark Tenchi 2001-04-11 ch 1, anon. | abusenice very nice i finaly got to read the ending chapter and i liked it just as well as i liked the rest of it i hope you write some more fanfic's just as good at this one |