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| Christina Simon 2003-12-04 ch 1, | abuseJust wanted to let you know... I've been reading these at Cover Me, and they're EXCELLENT. I love and adore practically everything you've ever written, and they've definitely had an impact on my own writing. :) So thanks for posting. |
| Fanatic482 2003-12-03 ch 1, | abuseYou know what I found striking about this one? Well, one instance of it... he's in a foul, nasty mood (to put it politely), then ticking off all the ways he's been propositioned... and then you say //from too many men and too many women//... that you chose to put men first, before women, is just one very interesting juxtaposition of wording and thought... love the provocation of it, intentional or not. //He doesn't know when it will end, though, only that Irina has promised that it will.// Funny, how after it has all gone down, that he still believes something Irina told him about the ending of it all, particularly the Rambaldi stuff... Very interesting, psychologically, that's for sure. Sark is one complicated man... although the simplicity of that "Everybody dies" sure does throw everything into a black and white world, doesn't it? :) |