 poems2songs 2008-04-14 . chapter 4interesting story... liked it... quite different... the ending wasn't quite clear so not sure if it was a kaoru/kenshin ending... but good job... great work... |
 Anonymous but very interested 2006-03-12 . chapter 4 I'm quite sure that I started reading this a while ago, but I never got to finish it.
This is so beautiful and sad...I love the bit about waiting at the oak tree, though that's quite sad, too. Unrequited love must hurt so much, and I think you portrayed the emotions in "The Disposition of Love" very well.
Thank you for sharing this with us all. I don't regret reading it at all.
Good luck.
=( for the sadness,
^_^ for what happiness may come... |
 Shinta-FAn!! 2004-08-03 . chapter 4 ah!! T_T oh man that was so sad! i'm crying! wa! i luv ur writing!! write more !! |
 Jessica 2004-03-11 . chapter 4 Really good! I love this story. It really touches the heart! I hope you continue to write more like this! |
 Day Dreamer 2004-03-10 . chapter 4 Oh my gosh! I really love this poem! Never have I cry somuch tears before in my life! Dang you could create such tears, talk about such pain, and yet still affect your readers. Gosh I am so proud of you my friend! |
 UkyoHimura 2003-12-23 . chapter 4Hey I read chapter 1 which was totally GREAT! But I didn't have a chase to read 2-4 but I printed them out for the X-Mas vaction. My friend read them and she said that you are going to stop writng. That you don't feel anymore something like that. Anyway you better not. Like you are a great writing. I really felt this poem. Actually like the best anime poem I read so you better not. |
 KatDrama 2003-12-20 . chapter 4Aww man...I'm in tears. That poem was so wonderful. Nicky9 plz don't stop! You may not like your writing, but I've known very few people to look back upon something they did and be satisfyed with the way it was. This poem had such deep meanings and true feelings. Before you stop writing, plz stop and think about what the readers are getting from it. It has had such an impact on me, it made me really think about the characters. It made me see what the characters were actually seeing inside. I got alot from this poem and though I haven't read any of your other fics I'm sure they are all just as good. Plz don't stop, for the sake of the readers plz continue. We need your stories! |
 en route 2003-12-19 . chapter 4im sorry but i just get jealous for kaoru when kenshin goes for tomoe instead of her...and if kaoru's and tomoe's personalities are switched..it kinda makes it worse.. but nevertheless, i LOVE this fic! but i was a little confused at the end...
oh and tell nicky that i'll miss her fics! |
 Wistful-Eyes 2003-12-19 . chapter 4I thought that was a really beautiful ending. I'm glad Tomoe and Kenshin got a happy ending, for a while at least...
You lost your inspiration?? I see... In meaning that you believe your writing is not good enough, you mean to yourself or your FANS? Yes, you have fans!
I really enjoyed reading this story. I would love it if you continued writing fics like this, but I understand that if you do not want to. As a writer myself, I understand that the biggest critic is sometimes yourself. I don't want to force or yell (as much as I can online, anyway) at you to beg you to continue, because these are your own works and what you do is your choice, but I wanted to let you know, that this fic has been one of the most enjoyable poem-fics I've ever read. You ARE really talented, in our eyes at least. I hope you feel better later on.
~Wistful-Eyes. |
 Female Hitokiri Battousai 2003-12-19 . chapter 4Well, i'm sorry i'm always late...
I think i should be known as fhb-latee...
I must commend this poem-4. It got most of my emotions spinning in one huge maelstrom. I must say, this was really touche'...
Well this fanfiction/poem was very deep. Alot of emotion flowed. You brought some people succumbed to sadness. Like me-- and others...
Though i never wished for the ending to be this way... i wished, there could of been a nicer alternative. But then-it wouldn't give the story the same touch...
I love your work nicky-i read most of your stuff except heart of speaks...and another one.
But i'm sorry i didn't review. I did fail you. Thank you deseray if u ever read this for being a pal to just support me alittle. Although i dont deserve such a comment...
All the best new writer, Deseray...
And all the best--best friend Nicky...
All the best girls, may god keep you safe and take care...
Fhb~ write for joy, write pain, write for relaxation, write for life...
FHB SIGNED HERE-X |
 Holliewood 2003-12-19 . chapter 4 What is this I hear? You're really giving up aren't you? I noticed before when you said you depressed. Getting depressed can really discourage from writing. Actually I think this was so damn good! You should have gotten more reviews then this. Forget about this people and continue what you love to do the best! You love to write and you really wrote this well! People don't know the meaning of writing anymore. They only go for something simple, but this, this is true masterpiece! If someone was nominating poems, this one will definetly make it through. Nicky9 you have to continue please! I'm begging you not to give up your passion, something you love to do best! |
 Holliewood 2003-12-19 . chapter 3 Awesome! Bravo! Continue soon girl! This is the best! This is the bomb! Conitnue soon will ya! |
 Jessica 2003-12-19 . chapter 4 How can you give up like that? Nicky9, please continue writing. This is one of the best stories I have ever encountered and you stopped! You really could write, better then me and a lot the people I encountered on this net. You leaving is like leaving a froest and letting it become a desert. No please don't give up Nicky9! |
 Jessica 2003-12-19 . chapter 3 This was like a wow! You rock girlfriend! This is for people all over there, Nicky9 is the best writer! |
 Daydreamer 2003-12-19 . chapter 4 Thanks Nicky9. You know I'll always support you. You're the best writer I have ever seen. Your writing made me cry, and to know you won't write anymore made me cry even more tears. Update and please don't give up Nicky9. You're the best! |