 tori_elf_luver 2004-12-12 . chapter 2 I like your story... yesterday I saw Terminator three... or the first third of it... for the first time ever. The only bit I know about Terminator two, would be the faces in it... and even then I don't remember much. I saw it like...a seriously long time ago, when I was at a relatives house, and I was'nt paying much attention... back then the only sci-fi stuff I liked was Star Wars.
You said you would update the story "very soon". Please explain how very soon equals more than a year... because I always thought it meant in like... a month. Oh well. I really want to know what will come next in the story...as I said- I like it. I was thinking about writing my own Terminator fanfiction when I turn thirteen in four months- do you have any advice? |
 Tower 2004-08-27 . chapter 2I want to known what your going to do in the next chapter so please get it up pronto!! I like. |
 Lyra Vazquez 2004-03-03 . chapter 2Hey i really really liked it, hopefullyu u continue! |
 Lyra Vazquez 2004-03-03 . chapter 1I liked this, i liked how u made it so kate and john werent imediately in love cause that would suck! And i like how its angst it makes it good! |
 JustinMacri 2004-01-24 . chapter 2 Hi,
I liked your Terminator story and i think it is cool. Please let me know when Chapter three is up and i want to know how they see what the surface looks like and i think when they see it. It should be like Indipenince Day.
Justin |
 Razial 2004-01-11 . chapter 2A veryy good beginning. Well written and the characterisation is prity good as well. please update soon
dave |
 bina 2003-12-12 . chapter 2 Scottie2
You definitely have me hooked. I've enjoyed the pace so far.
"John was almost disappointed when she stopped. Life as a ghost had its disadvantages, almost all of them emotional but some were physical…"
This line and the missing the missing engagement ring were beautifully planted. I can't wait to see how you continue to develop Kate and John's relationship.
More please.
Sincerely,
Bina:-) |
 tgmoxie 2003-12-11 . chapter 2Nice follow-up. Keep going. I'm perched on the edge of my seat to see what happens next. I like the pace, the awkwardness. You've got me hooked. |
 Isilmeselde 2003-12-09 . chapter 2I liked how your stories going so far. Can't wait to read more! Keep up the good work. |
 Mbwun 2003-12-09 . chapter 2Good stuff so far; I like your characterization, and how you're building the relationship between John and Kate.
~He Who Walks On All Fours |
 tgmoxie 2003-12-07 . chapter 1I love this first chapter, please write more!! I hated that the movie ended there, and I hope for a follow-up book or sequel.
Keep writing... |
 hammergal 2003-12-05 . chapter 1Very good job! That could be exactly the next scene in the movie. I'm loving all this T3 fic with Kate and John, even wrote a few myself. Hope authors will continue. Go with this, it's terrific so far.
hammergal |