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tori_elf_luver
2004-12-12 . chapter 2
I like your story... yesterday I saw Terminator three... or the first third of it... for the first time ever. The only bit I know about Terminator two, would be the faces in it... and even then I don't remember much. I saw it like...a seriously long time ago, when I was at a relatives house, and I was'nt paying much attention... back then the only sci-fi stuff I liked was Star Wars.
You said you would update the story "very soon". Please explain how very soon equals more than a year... because I always thought it meant in like... a month. Oh well. I really want to know what will come next in the story...as I said- I like it. I was thinking about writing my own Terminator fanfiction when I turn thirteen in four months- do you have any advice?
Tower
2004-08-27 . chapter 2
I want to known what your going to do in the next chapter so please get it up pronto!! I like.
Lyra Vazquez
2004-03-03 . chapter 2
Hey i really really liked it, hopefullyu u continue!
Lyra Vazquez
2004-03-03 . chapter 1
I liked this, i liked how u made it so kate and john werent imediately in love cause that would suck! And i like how its angst it makes it good!
JustinMacri
2004-01-24 . chapter 2
Hi,
I liked your Terminator story and i think it is cool. Please let me know when Chapter three is up and i want to know how they see what the surface looks like and i think when they see it. It should be like Indipenince Day.
Justin
Razial
2004-01-11 . chapter 2
A veryy good beginning. Well written and the characterisation is prity good as well. please update soon
dave
bina
2003-12-12 . chapter 2
Scottie2
You definitely have me hooked. I've enjoyed the pace so far.
"John was almost disappointed when she stopped. Life as a ghost had its disadvantages, almost all of them emotional but some were physical…"
This line and the missing the missing engagement ring were beautifully planted. I can't wait to see how you continue to develop Kate and John's relationship.
More please.
Sincerely,
Bina:-)
tgmoxie
2003-12-11 . chapter 2
Nice follow-up. Keep going. I'm perched on the edge of my seat to see what happens next. I like the pace, the awkwardness. You've got me hooked.
Isilmeselde
2003-12-09 . chapter 2
I liked how your stories going so far. Can't wait to read more! Keep up the good work.
Mbwun
2003-12-09 . chapter 2
Good stuff so far; I like your characterization, and how you're building the relationship between John and Kate.
~He Who Walks On All Fours
tgmoxie
2003-12-07 . chapter 1
I love this first chapter, please write more!! I hated that the movie ended there, and I hope for a follow-up book or sequel.
Keep writing...
hammergal
2003-12-05 . chapter 1
Very good job! That could be exactly the next scene in the movie. I'm loving all this T3 fic with Kate and John, even wrote a few myself. Hope authors will continue. Go with this, it's terrific so far.
hammergal
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