"Little ** better not poke him with a stick or anything. He'd kick his ** **."
-Ch. 1 LMAO

I adored this. You write Akutsu and Taka-san really well. Great job!

Ooh I love this fic and especially this chapter to pieces! I'm usually not a big Aku/Taka-fan, but I just had to change my views for you and this fic. ;D Keep up this magnificent work!

I speak spanish, but when I read "AkutsuTaka", I had to read it.

I really like it. Takashi is so good with Akutsu... And he's still a bloody hell bastard xD.

I hope you can continue it.

PD: Sorry if the english is wrong... I don't have too much practice.

you must write more!
You need to write more!
must not stop at a point like this!
@.@ -goes crazy-

this is a REALLY good story so far ...me and my friends were trying to give all the seigaku characters pairings and at first we didnt think that there was anyone that would go well with takashi, but then i thought of jin ..i have been looking everywhere for jin/taka stories this is really really good PLEASEE continue it

That was really excellent! :) I thought you captured both of them really well, especially Akutsu. Incidentally, I know this fic is pretty old now (*slow on the uptake*) and maybe you don't write anymore but is there anywhere I can read your other work? The site in your profile appears to be, er, MIA. #^^# Thanks!

Totally cute (never thought I'd call Akutsu cute, but I like the guy)!

*smile* That was cute. ^__^ And I luv the way you write Jin~! ^o^ Reminded me a lot of Yami Bakura actually, which is weird cause I haen't been an a YuGiOh brain-state lately.. >.> Wah~! But that was so cute~! Exactly what I was looking for! ^^

Ah, this is (still) such my favorite story in the whole wide world... *sigh* Looking forward to whatever you write next!

My god, I love the way you write. I read your NC-17 fics on your site and my god, your style alone could make me melt into a big pile of mushy-want-to-be-able-to-write-that-damn-well-ness. If that makes any sense whatsoever.
Anyway, with this fic though, my god I love, adore, and worship the way you write Akutsu. And Taka is perfect. Ye gods if I didn't love this couple before then I would really love it now. Seriously.
And I'm making no sense whatso ever, I just want to sit here and praise you. I can't even think of any constructive criticism that would make this less a fangirl squee and more of a true review. then again your fics have melted my brain into that pile of mush so I guess it's no surprise whatsoever.
All I can end here with is a plea for more. Especially more Akutsu/Taka. I'll be watching your site like a hawk!

Wow. Cool story. I must admit, I only started reading out for the novelty factor (AkutsuTaka is not exactly the pairing that springs to mind when you think about PoT) and found myself hooked. It's really good, but my only quibble -- or more accurately, rabid fan request -- is if you could expand more on Akutsu's personality. Say in another story? Pretty please? Would love to see you write about why Akutsu refused to play tennis any more, or what went on in his mind when he turned 'bad' and Taka's reaction to both.

I can't BELIEVE you only have two reviews for this. You actually made me go and log in which I haven't in forever just so I could gush at you.
THIS. IS. SO. GOOD. It's Akutsu's voice, perfectly, and Akutsu's view of Taka-san and... well. This was GREAT.

I'm so glad you've written more fics, and started posting stuff here.^^ You seem to be one of the few people who writes AkuTaka stuff, which is a shame, since I love this pairing. Akutsu's thoughts throughout this fic made me laugh, not only because they were funny, but because I could actually SEE him thinking them.^^ And Taka was adorable, as he always is/should be.^^ I hope to see more from you soon!^^

I read this through your blog, and I thoroughly enjoyed it (all of fics, in fact - they're wonderfully long and detailed and introspective and, yes, usually smutty, lol). It's quite nice to have at least one big Taka fan out there, since the poor boy gets all but ignored as anything more than "BURNING!" by most people in this fandom. My only comment on this ff.net version of your story is: I think it was much more effective as one continuous story, rather than 5 short chapters. It makes it.. flow better, for lack of a better phrase.
Since I'm babbling anyway, I'll also comment on your new Shinji/Kamio story: AH! I loved it to death! Thank you for writing teenage boys acting like teenage boys, but still making it deliciously interesting and intense. ^_^ I absolutely adore your Kamio, and Shinji is my favorite character anyway, so automatic bonus points. ^_^;