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AnonymousNavi
2008-07-23
ch 1,
abuseTruly awesome and well portrayed. 8D I loved it.
Crimson Kaoru
2008-03-18
ch 1,
abuseI really liked this. How lovely! All of your stuff is, of course.
Evil Riggs
2007-10-18
ch 1,
abuseNot exactly self-contained, but the content is so solid that I don't really care. Easygoing, evocative, and enjoyable. Win.
CultivateYourHunger
2007-08-09
ch 1,
abuseVery sweet and realistic, you made a great character or Zelda or what-ever-her-pirate-name-was, I can't actually remember at the moment but I still loved this XD
The Walker of Dreams
2007-07-05
ch 1,
abuseBeautiful. Simply beautiful. I loved it.
Apollo Justicesggigg
2007-07-03
ch 1,
abuseNormally I write my review before viewing the others, but I made a mistake this time and read the review of others first, and now I feel that I'm probably writing the worst review here.

I thought that this story was brilliant. Short but simple. To the point. It flows like the sea itself. You've been very descriptive, kept the theme and style steady through-out.

Somehow it's short but also very long, very... well, I can't describe it, really. That's always been my issue.

Great work, great writing, keep working, keep writing.
Name:
2006-12-30
ch 1, anon.
abuseNice :D
AI
2006-04-07
ch 1, anon.
abuseSo lyrical and I love the images you evoke. I liked how you tied in Ocarina of Time in here. Bravo!
ProfessorSpork
2005-01-03
ch 1,
abuseAw, now THAT was cute. Very well done.
anime animal
2004-11-23
ch 1,
abuseThat was beautifully written and so emotive. Instant fave.
The Mad shoe
2004-06-25
ch 1, anon.
abuse...wow...
Startide Risen
2004-06-23
ch 1,
abuseAbsolutely beautiful!
Endearing characterization, lovely prose, and a style I adore. The world needs more stories like this.
deja.blue
2004-05-03
ch 1,
abuseThat was /awesome/.
Truly.
Wonderfully written (especially for a game whose graphics seem so adorably cartoony) and your characters were so completely real and fleshed out...^^
You have quite some talent.
WindWaker!Link really does have a genius for faces, ne? And your mixing of the serious bits and the sweet/comic bits really created some cool characters, without completely pulling them out of their game-selves (which is a difficulty for a lot of writers).
Great job!
::skips off to check out the other stuff on this profile::
funky-squirrel
2004-03-24
ch 1,
abuseWow! Great story! I really liked it and had fun reading it. ^^ I love how Tetra's personality shines through throughout the entire dialogue. My favourite lines has gotta be "That dress is a true sallybitch to nock an arrow in and not fall flat on her face, and no mistake."
Mike
2003-12-23
ch 1, anon.
abuseWhi-tssh. So. Whipped. But I always thought of Link as such... it seems like you write so effortlessly.
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