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Peace of the Moon
2009-03-04 . chapter 1
Very nice. Will this be continued?

If not, I think you should mark it as complete. So that others don't alert it and find out that it is supposedly finished.
twilightm00n
2008-08-10 . chapter 1
Very well done. I like how Tetra views the princesses before her haha
Wolfiee
2008-08-06 . chapter 1
aww i really liked this. its different than any tetralink i've ever read. you wrotte eit very well and i think you really captured their characters.

loved it :)

AnonymousNavi
2008-07-23 . chapter 1
Truly awesome and well portrayed. 8D I loved it.
zephyrian
2008-03-18 . chapter 1
I really liked this. How lovely! All of your stuff is, of course.
Evil Riggs
2007-10-18 . chapter 1
Not exactly self-contained, but the content is so solid that I don't really care. Easygoing, evocative, and enjoyable. Win.
FearandLoathingXVIII
2007-08-09 . chapter 1
Very sweet and realistic, you made a great character or Zelda or what-ever-her-pirate-name-was, I can't actually remember at the moment but I still loved this XD
The Walker of Dreams
2007-07-05 . chapter 1
Beautiful. Simply beautiful. I loved it.
Apollo Justicesggigg
2007-07-03 . chapter 1
Normally I write my review before viewing the others, but I made a mistake this time and read the review of others first, and now I feel that I'm probably writing the worst review here.

I thought that this story was brilliant. Short but simple. To the point. It flows like the sea itself. You've been very descriptive, kept the theme and style steady through-out.

Somehow it's short but also very long, very... well, I can't describe it, really. That's always been my issue.

Great work, great writing, keep working, keep writing.
Name:
2006-12-30 . chapter 1
Nice :D
AI
2006-04-07 . chapter 1
So lyrical and I love the images you evoke. I liked how you tied in Ocarina of Time in here. Bravo!
ProfessorSpork
2005-01-03 . chapter 1
Aw, now THAT was cute. Very well done.
anime animal
2004-11-23 . chapter 1
That was beautifully written and so emotive. Instant fave.
The Mad shoe
2004-06-25 . chapter 1
...wow...
Startide Risen
2004-06-23 . chapter 1
Absolutely beautiful!
Endearing characterization, lovely prose, and a style I adore. The world needs more stories like this.
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