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Bianca Williams 2006-03-17 ch 1, anon.	abuseThat's a shame Ajedrez and sands was never ment to be seen with each other and another thing they don't need to be together, and they most definitly don't make a good alinance.
Mrs Lovett 88 2006-02-21 ch 7,	abuseI loved these ficlets, very well done as usual!
Brae 2005-03-08 ch 1, anon.	abuseAwesome. Very very very awesome.
Raquedan 2004-03-25 ch 7,	abuseif only that was so. hi becky, sorry- haven't reviewed in a while but the first period bell is about to ring and i have to go NOW. talk later.
Kate Swynford 2004-03-12 ch 7,	abuseIt's amazing and overwhelming how a chance meeting can change one's life. Sands is so... Sands: arrogant, manipulative, thinking he throws all shapes and that phrase at the end - "She would never have seen him coming." So evilly, bitterly ironic. Are you going to continue this? I hope so.
Kate Swynford 2004-03-09 ch 6,	abuseScary. And it could only get scarier for the boy.
Kate Swynford 2004-02-16 ch 5,	abuseI almost forgot that Bel wasn't in the movie. She fits in so well.
Kate Swynford 2004-02-16 ch 4,	abuseGod, that was ironic. Bitterly ironic - how a man can plan everything so carefully and be so sure of the result - and look what happens. Ironic in a different way - if this is your trilogy-verse. "Dumb and good-looking". :)
Kate Swynford 2004-02-16 ch 3,	abuse"Screaming would be preferable, but he couldn't see - oh god couldn't see - how he could accomplish that, so there was only one other choice." - this little insert is like a stab of genuine paim through all the bravado. The way Sands tells the kid to run - for purely selfish reasons, not out of any kindness - is so Sands, a manipulator to the end.
Kate Swynford 2004-02-16 ch 2,	abuseOh, I remember that moment. I never saw it coming. This is the moment where Sands is at his best/worst. This is when you start to beleive that he is so brilliant that he can pull anything off through sheer insolence. You've captured it so well.
Kate Swynford 2004-02-12 ch 1,	abuseA brilliant look inside Sands' head - a manipulative bastard to the end, but so very, very brave and strong-willed.
l-dhenson 2004-01-23 ch 7,	abuse/Only an amateur went to all the trouble of coming up with fake identities./ Love this, the layered game-playing, Sands falling for the more transparent deception and never seeing the bigger one. /She would never have seen him coming./ Irony is always delicious. (Oh, and I finally got my DVD after all. Got tired of waiting for delivery--got doubly tired of squinting at my coughdownloadedcough copy to make sure I was interpreting the imagery correctly--and just went out and bought the darn thing.)
l-dhenson 2004-01-16 ch 6,	abuseLove this chapter--the boy remains one of my favorite characters. He was obviously headed /somewhere/ before Sands came along, and I really like your interpretation and the way you paint his innocence. /Suddenly going home sounded like a very good thing to do./ I felt my stomach drop a little at this line, knowing that within an hour the boy's going to have a gun pressed to his head and witness a number of bloody shootings. Poor kid.
l-dhenson 2004-01-16 ch 4,	abuseI don't know which part of this vignette I like more: The bit where Sands decides El isn't much to look at on first glance made me laugh, because during my first two viewings of OUATIM I didn't think El was all that (I've since learned better). Or the bit where Sands works through his idea of achieving balance...frightening, and frighteningly logical.
l-dhenson 2004-01-16 ch 1,	abuse/Dying by inches, on the other hand, was hard work./ Yay. More fic from you makes me happy, even if I'm terribly slow in reading it. /A country to ** over in return for what's been done to me. Balance to restore./ I like this: a new kind of balance, this one centered on himself. Nice.

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