iz very nice

I LOVED it, keep up the good work!

Peace, Love, Hapiness

OH this was a great fanfic I have really enjoyed reading it. Also I want to comment that Sarah and Jareth were in perfect character.

That was a sweet ending. Poor Toby, he was too young to die. This is a tear jerker, and it was perfect for my current state of mind. Good luck.

ack! that was so cute! a bit fast-paced, but looking at the chapters, its a short lot so its excusable. very good! cant wait to read the rest!

aw it's such a sad story. it does have happiness to it which is good. although this would have to be my favorite part:

“It’s getting late love, you should come in now, besides, Hogbrain’s here to see you.”

“It’s-”

“Yes I know, Hoggle,” he smirked at her. “Just let me have my fun.”

She frowned at him before giving in and laughing.

when they expressed their love so fast it sounded so damn corny!the way you wrote it ( NNO OFFENSE!)

one word EVIL! why tobe? crying, screaming, crying some more.

i loved it. whats going to happen next? please update very soon.

hey, great fic. i read the first chap and it woulda been good as a firstshot, but i like it better as a longer story. later

Nice ending, it's quite sweet. I've enjoyed your story very much.

For a 1st Epilogue, you've done a beautiful piece here. Are you hoping to start another story soon? If you are thing of starting something else, what would the subject be; ie. Labyrinth, Phantom Of The Opera... etc,

Just hoping that you'll carry on writing I really enjoy your work. Thank you!

Painful? Not at all!

Even though it was short, it fit well with this story as an epilogue. Perhaps if you should ever re-edit, I'd like to see her reflect a bit more on her life in the time she's been with him (and I know that is hard when you don't have a clear picture of it yourself). Anyways, it was just a thought - I truly enjoyed this story and I look forward to more from you!

not painful at all my friend. good job!

that was so sweet but a little too fast

i enjoyed it though

write more J/S fics