This is an amazing story! I absolutely loved it, great concept.


~Willow

great story

great story!! (ps the story is not 'officially' completed)

Greta story. I always love to read good Max and ALec fics.

Everything is great about the story.Only one suggestion or I guess question...Why is Max being portrayed as just a sex object/non-participant?? She is the , I guess in this fic co-leader of TC, which is great.I like when Max and Alec are on equal footing.But he is doing everything.Making all the decisions, giving all the directions, doing all the fighting, hacking , communicating...she has nothing to do.Empower her alittle more.That would make the story perfect.I don't want you to think I do not like the story though, it is great.This is just a suggestion.I like a more empowered Max.

Oh my gods, WOW! I seriously have chills. That was incredible. I.Must.Read.More.Now! Lol.

Gosh, this chapter rocked seriously hard. I am so excited. Manticore has toughened up. I wonder what this will mean for Alec and Max. Oh, I can't wait to read more.

Another AMAZING chappie! Alec is so sweet in this. You can definatly tell that he has grown and matured *alot* over the years. I guess running a nation will do that to you. Lol. Wow, I am so excited. You are so good!

Wow, you are a really good writer. Amazing descriptions and I love how you explained in perfect detail just how Max and Alec began to love each other. I haven't really seen that done by anyone else yet. And I have a feeling there is going to be lots of action and drama in this story as well. I can't wait to see what happens. Really excellent start!

Whoa, intense. I'm loving it.

it was a pretty good story.

Great story. Please write a sequel…or a prequel.
~C'est Magnifique

like the story

I should have been keeping up with this all along. My bad. : ) I really like the way you worked this out. And I have to say I loved the Aliens scene. Hee! That was a really good movie.

You did a wonderful job writing all the action parts as well as the intrigue. I look forward to your next story. : )

BHG

Nice summation of the fic, I hope you right a sequel so we can see what else happens with our lovable transgenics.

Wonderful way to conclude it! Keep writing.