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mnemox
2008-09-27 . chapter 1
Oh, I love this! So sweet. You did a great job. Thanks.
speadee
2007-07-03 . chapter 1
"If You're Gone" does fit them in a way, especially after the fight in Episode 52. I like watching the scene in Episode 53 where Momoshiro returns and the Golden Pair make up, especially right after watching the fight scene in Episode 52 (gives better effect). I just like seeing things resolved.

I have always thought that the apology and getting back together was kind of too sudden and simple, and thought that they would have to explain themselves. You did a good job with that. I'm glad they talked it out and settled it earlier than in the anime. Good job showing how they really are the Golden Pair!
niema
2007-01-06 . chapter 1
Simply delightful to read!!
kawaiichiisaikitsune
2006-01-10 . chapter 1
Aww, that was cute. Kiari-san gives you a triple thumbs up! ^-^

~Kiari-san
Atealia
2005-12-30 . chapter 1
Aw! So sweet and cute! ^_^ Ooishi and Eiji are just a perfect pair. I just loved all the little things you added in where Ooishi thought how the places there were could be this or that instead... Just added the right touch to the story and give it this.. feel and tone that was just really nice :)
Goggelgirl
2005-07-06 . chapter 1
AWE!
I tihnk that was the best Golden Pair fic I've ever read!
I started to cry a bit in the middle, but then I cheered up! ^^

Golden pair forever, nya!

Great fic! ^^
Renn
2005-06-09 . chapter 1
That was just soo cute! I totally loved it! Adored it! I practically praised it!...hem...really, ya know...^^
Keki
2005-03-16 . chapter 1
Aww, this story is so sweet! I love the idea of 'Nurse Eiji', and that almost kiss... It was good. Oishi and Eiji make a great pair in anything.
Nekocin
2004-04-08 . chapter 1
Gods! That's so wonderfully written. I love the description. Simple and easy to understand. lol. Even the jokes and the Golden Pair quickies. *hearts* So cute about the 'nurse Eiji' joke and *sighs* how disappointing that Oishi hadn't done something unexpected towards Eiji like kissing him as he'd almost done. -_- Baka!! ~_~
But anyways I like the story. Very nicely written.
thiel
2004-04-05 . chapter 1
is sweet. is sappy. but all are good stuff. ^_^
i think there was not even a moment when i doubted the credibility of this story; Eiji's fear, Oishi's confusion, subtle hints at love and emotions...you truly are a good writer.plus you write convincing dialogues when others fail to do so, they sounds just like what ppl will expect from the original character...
treana
2004-02-01 . chapter 1
^_^ aw. cute golden pair sap, my fav ^_^ i wish they had kissed, but i guess it is more realistic this way. my fav part is where they screamed the 'half the golden pair is an idiot!' line. ^_^ that was good.
^_^ thankies for writing such an awesome story! ^_^
Lauren-sama
2003-12-29 . chapter 1
Amazing dialogue. You hear people talk sometimes about conversations where "every word is essential in expressing the personality of a character": this seems to be a good example of that, because your sentences are such *good reflections* of these people. I love the way you talk about special places, and how so many facets of this relationship are left unsaid. The future discussion, too, was really insightful; it gave off a strong sense of Eiji's irresponsibility (I'm looking for a better word, but without success), as well as how much he depends on Oishi. I'm not sure what else to say. You're a very insightful, *good* author, and I'm really enjoying your works. Thanks again for sharing.
Thistle-Chaser
2003-12-18 . chapter 1
Aw, very sweet and cute. Not my OTP, but still, who can resist them? :) Thanks for writing and sharing this!
Mahon
2003-12-12 . chapter 1
Cutest thing EVER. I adore the Golden Pair so. Do continue soon.
Rumiko Nadajima
2003-12-08 . chapter 1
That was so beautiful...T_T Making me feel all mushy. Wish it ended with, er, a deeper relationship formed? *sweatdrops* Anyway, very sweet/sappy but so *sniff* nice...
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