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| eternallycharmed 2008-06-18 ch 8,  | abuseO, cool story! I like your take on wyatt, how he's still a big brother to Chris, even when he's a tyranical dictator. I especially like the end where Chris goes back to the future and Phoebe has that premonitioon. I think this is the only story I ever read where Chris went back to the future. I like that, how he changed along with the future and not died and disapeared. :) |
| piperspeanut 2008-06-12 ch 1, | abuseHey I know there are 8 chapters on this one, but I just started it and I can't finish it yet so I am adding it to my list. I love this story and the way Wyatt can be so rough on Chris, but yet caring in a way...healing him and what not. Good story. |
| Willow-98 2008-06-10 ch 8, | abuseI really loved this story. I think that you had a unique take on how Wyatt was turned and I loved that he was still a protective big brother (although an unorthadox one). Great job =D ~Willow |
| Sezza115 2008-05-11 ch 8, | abuseawesome:) |
| luv me xoxo gossipgal 2008-05-06 ch 8, | abuseaww. i love it. no better ending ( 4 this story at least) |
| luv me xoxo gossipgal 2008-05-06 ch 7, | abusethose two. i swear they are pmsin. one min they " hate" eachother then they all lovey dovey |
| Gemarah 2008-05-03 ch 8, anon. | abuseHey. That was nice. I liked the beginning and I liked the brothers' bond. And I liked how Chris was behaving in Faerie land. That was an amusing part to read. The dancing...lol, and when he said about how their powers are supposed to be used for fun. I cracked up when he said that. :p Yeah... The whole Leo/Chris thing was...well, after that scene in the episode The Courtship of Wyatt's Father(not sure of the title), I thought Chris didn't like Leo so much, so that was a little weird. I also thought Wyatt was a little OoC, a little bit. By that I mean, a little too emotional. But maybe I've been reading too many angsty Charmed fics. I liked how you handled the sisters. You wrote them just how I like them. I just thought the ending was a little...rushed? Sort of anti-climactic in a way, especially with Gideon. Maybe that's just me... It was very nice to read about something like what the brothers are capable of together instead of just Wyatt being the only powerful one, that was a good touch. Anyway, this is now going on my favs. :) Pce. |
| ladylookslikeadude 2008-02-09 ch 8, | abuseNice. I like it a whole lot. |
| JennMel 2008-01-25 ch 8, | abuseA really beautiful story :) |
| sexyirishBeep 2008-01-20 ch 1, | abusethis story rocks |
| Cirolane 2007-09-18 ch 8, | abuseI'm asuming that was the end of this story? And what a great story it was. I really really loved it. You did a great job in writing this=) I'm putting it on my favorites and I'm probably going to read it several times in the future=) |
| PrInCeSsFBi 2007-08-19 ch 3, | abuseIM ABSOLUTELY LOVING THIS It's great love love love it |
| goddessa39 2007-04-29 ch 8, | abuse*sniffle.* I loved it!... the only thing i think should have been different was that you should have added Bianca in at the end. :) |
| Blackangle2011 2007-04-19 ch 8, | abuseupdate soon! |
| Ryo-girl 2007-03-12 ch 6, | abuseLoved it. |