this is a good story so far! hope u update real soon.

More please!

Wow... pretty... cool... yeah... (shakes head really hard) sorry. It's hard to concentrait. Anywho, I like it! If you could put Mewtwo into the next chapter, that would be evan cooler!
Mewtwo: You will put me in thew rest of the chapters! (hols up a paw with the Shadow-Ball thing charging up on it)

Yay! You updated! ^.^

It's very...um...what's that word?
Aegis: Interesting? I don't know.
Bill: Funny!
Aegis: O.o AH! KEEP HIM AWAY FROM ME! *shots Swan Pro*
Well, it's very good! Please update! I'll wait.
Tootles!

This is hilarious. Period. KEEP GOING!
AND GOING
AND GOING...
Please update asap, thsi is hilarious

Well finally you updated... I was waiting for this for a long time now. But oh well this is like the only update from anyone on my author alert list. I know it is very small. But I have been spending most of my time reading fanfictions on Animespiral.com So yeah... That is all... Update on your other stories and this one too!
Your faithful minnion,
Ruinu

Wicked-awesome story mate! =P Peach's guess's hade me cracking up, so well done. *claps*
Please keep writing, if you do the next chapter soon I'll ADD YOU TO MY FAVOURITES LIST! HOORAY!

Aww, this is cute!! I like it I hope you plan on continuing it!

Me: Um, pancake and bacon pizza!? O_O'
Marth: Sounds good! ^.^
Me: -_-' Me you'll eat anything that's not tied down!
Marth: Acctully, I can cut the rope with my sword! ^_^
Me: O_O' Never mind...