Excellent story thus far, though it apprears that it has been abandoned.
I noticed a distinct improvement from the first Shepherd book.
If you ever want to continue this story and need a beta you can contact me.

Thanks fo rthe great read

Rebekah

Very nice! Just got finished reading your other one with Eve, and am looking forward to more on this one!

Well, when university gives you a chance, that is...isn't further study a pain?

an excellent story so far. i loved the first one, and am eager for more of the second. eve is an interesting character, and i like how you incorporated her into the story. i hope you update soon ^-^

Great Snape angst - not tipping into melodrama. (I get the impression he'd be embarrassed by melodrama) I liked the idea of the superego potion, and the question of what Snape would do next.

Wonderful, descriptive and evocative - the sadness and fear and other effects of V's resurrection are really well conveyed, and in such wonderful writing.
Thanks very much.

Oh--what's next? It looks like it will be very, very good!