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| Mousker 2006-02-07 ch 3, | abuseExcellent story thus far, though it apprears that it has been abandoned. I noticed a distinct improvement from the first Shepherd book. If you ever want to continue this story and need a beta you can contact me. Thanks fo rthe great read Rebekah |
| barncat 2004-10-15 ch 3, | abuseVery nice! Just got finished reading your other one with Eve, and am looking forward to more on this one! Well, when university gives you a chance, that is...isn't further study a pain? |
| Kyryal-Neko 2004-06-16 ch 3, | abusean excellent story so far. i loved the first one, and am eager for more of the second. eve is an interesting character, and i like how you incorporated her into the story. i hope you update soon ^-^ |
| LadyRhiyana 2003-12-18 ch 2, anon. | abuseGreat Snape angst - not tipping into melodrama. (I get the impression he'd be embarrassed by melodrama) I liked the idea of the superego potion, and the question of what Snape would do next. |
| LadyRhiyana 2003-12-17 ch 1, anon. | abuseWonderful, descriptive and evocative - the sadness and fear and other effects of V's resurrection are really well conveyed, and in such wonderful writing. Thanks very much. |
| swim_meg1959 2003-12-08 ch 1, anon. | abuseOh--what's next? It looks like it will be very, very good! |