Wow,really well written, I like it!^_^*thumbs up*That was neat!

That was very well done. Awesome descriptions and very good use of words. Sweet Chaos must have been going absolutely crazy! ^^ Keep up the writing, you are a great author.

Hey! This is Melody from TFME. Nice to get to read more of your work! Excellent job on the descriptions and the transitions getween points of view. I liked seeing the battle from Kamatari's point of view. It gives one insights into the characters.

This is a good story, but it could use some more introspection.

THIS!! Was just lovely!
What a great story idea. I like seeing Kaoru actually fight and using this fight was perfect.
The differnt POVs were also very intersting and well written.
This was a awesome story,
Thanks so much for posting,
Hope to see more form you in the future,
This is ME signing out

you really write good, can you write some about Soujiro?

Nice job! ^_^ I think you got the way Kamatari thinks perfectly. It seems like her. Er, him. -_-'
I always get confused about that. I guess I'll just refer her-him as a girl. X_X' Anyway, I thought it was pretty good. I thought it'd be nice if you put whole-line spaces between your paragraphs tho; its easier to read, for me at least. ^^' And Kenshin's sword style is spelled Hiten Mitsurugi, in case you wanted to know. ^^'
Well, all in all, it was pretty good! Nice job.
~Wistful-Eyes

O! *claps hands in excitement* YOU WROTE A KAMATARI STORY!! *dances around* I love that man so much. *dies of happiness* Can I link this to my shrine? You get credit, of course...