Such a cute story!

Really liked your story, never did like the ending in the show. It's interesting that Harm and Mac are both guardians for Mattie, the writers of JAG should have had that idea too ;-)
Anyway, great story

Oh no. You can't just leave it there. What about Harm and Mac. And what about Mattie's situation? You've got to write more! (begging and pleading) Well done.

great story.

A beautiful ending to a beautiful story...

I like the ending. I wish it was longer.

No! Not the end! More more more! Uh, please? =o)
cmaf *i'm not really here, i'm merely a figment of your imagination* *boo!*

I really love your fic! It's great! ~SammyBlack

that was a great ending. happy holidays! :)

Please add more chapters to this story. It's one of my favorites, and I think you could really make it incredible.

That was so beautiful. You really must write more.

Beautiful ending! I loved the metaphore you used between Harm and Mac's eyes (water beating against the rocks, or something like that). It was just gorgeous! I'll keep an eye out for more of your work. Have a Merry Christmas!
~sancti

That would have made a much better ending to the episode we got from DPB.

Great story!
And a Merry Christmas to You too...

Wow I really, really like that chapter. Harm and Mac need to be a couple. I could almost picture them watching movies. Please continue !