Omg! That was so not fair! How could you do that to me? How could you end it there? *tear tear* I'm shocked! Please I mean PUH-LEASE write more ASAP and e-mail me when you put out the next chapter!

it was great but waz wt the moonstar thing? heheh it was great!

That was cool!

to short i think it would've been better as a long story

Sucked. Horrible. No plot, too fast, and the singing part was way to cliche. The paragraph was bunched up and hard to read, the format, overall, was annoying to the eyes. Not only that, no backround material on any of the people. D-.

very funny...

loL...I luved it!

Cute! I liked it, though I think it could have been longer...it was kinda rushed and short, though I know you meant for that to happen.