While all the things you said in the authors note were true (she wouldn't end her life like that) the creation is still breathtakingly perfect. This was amazing. The words paint vivid pictures of sunlight on wings and the calm of the ocean depths. As sad as it is to think of Numair dead and Daine desperately searching for belonging, I'm so glad you wrote it. It puts my little stories to shame.

that was a nice story. very well written. i dont much like the ending, the serious fashion it was written in was very nice up until the end, i almost laughed at the end. i think that it should have ended with a description of how her life ends in the same peaceful way that the rest of the story was written in. i think that would have done the story justice.
over all, a very good fic.

I enjoyed it. Not your normal happy-go-lucky fic. Very enjoyable. Creative and with a twist, what more can you ask for?

what!? dod she die? what... not getting it. just out of curiosity, did you kill numiar too?

this is beautiful... so sad, but at the end there is a great sense of peace and renewal...
thank you for writing it... :)
*Lizzy*

*stares aimlessly at the screen*
Oh...It's such a sad, yet moving story, I do like it very much.