OMG i loved it, so sad it ended

hi there! i'm british and me an my mates say '** you off' when its needed. um... the slang might be different where i live, but we say stuff like- home james (you have to put on a really fake posh accent on for that one)um...apples and pears (stairs) thats rhyming slang... toodles (bye) hope that helped a wee bit.

This is one of the coolest ToadOC fics I've ever read, and I've read a lot. Your character as believable and likable, and the story was certainly a deviation on the usual. While Toad had a tiny bit of OOC on a few occasions, he is hard to keep IC and you did spectacularly. Truly great, you chould consider another little something like that!

'Bloody 'ell' is a good all-purpose phrase, if you need one.

'I like art'?
Did you even realize that you ref.ed an X-Files episode there?

I know, I know, this story is fab, but can I nitpick at something really tiny?

You wrote: "...John's sweet voice began to sing about a face he couldn't forget."

I'm figuring, if you're talking about "I've Just Seen a Face", that's sung by Paul's 'sweet voice'. Just noticed it and wondered. :P Also a few spelling mistakes somewhere, like 'write' and 'right', but oh well. Figured if I'm gonna nitpick, then I'll just add that in.

Great job, btw. Still my only favorite Toad story.

I read this story a long long time ago. AND I FREAKIN LOVE IT!

Awesome story. Toad is perfectly, wonderfuly, fabulously in character and I'm so insanely happy when people do that to my faves. Great job on it. ;)

MY GOD I WHISH I WAS GABBY RIGHT NOW! She's so friken lucky that she kissed ToaD. I would trade my soul to kiss him, oh wait i can't, I already sold it to buy sausage prducts. CRAP! oh well. Great story.

Loved your story. Too bad it's over. Finally Mortimer gets the attention he deserves. The world needs more fic's like yours.

Thanks

I'm an idiot! I love this story and so have read it some 3 or 4 times and I never got the "Struck by lightening!" referance until now. It's from "The Hobbit", right?

Judgment: Likey, very muchly. Brilliantly done.
Mood: Happy
Status: Eagerly awaiting sequel
Feeling: Impatient

Please put up the sequel soon.

Dude. I must say, and you will hate me, that I have been avoiding this story for it's original charecters. I'm not a big fan of pairing Mort with random people, but I finally did take the time to read it and I'm so glad I did. This was lovely and not too fluffy or anything. Please accapt my most humblest of apologies for not trusting you when I like everything else you've written. Joly good and well done. Write me some more TOad stuff, PLEASE?

Shame on I. I just realized that, having read this lovely tale several times through, I have NEVER reviewed. If you'll accept the praise of a latent lurker, I am thrilled to have found a Toad romance that doesn't melt to mush by the end.

...bloody brilliant! Honestly, It is wicked. I really hope there is a sequel. *hint* *hint*.